Things become better and better
I went to my classroom and drew again, and suddenly I realised I could find the pleasure from painting. I listened to some rock music and these gave me the power to draw. I'm getting warm up now. I felt like that I no longer. I think got over it!
Besides, Good new is that I felt like I'm making progress. I drew it better and better with the time passing by. Well, it's a great phenomenon, so I must keep it up, raise my head up and go forth toward my dream!
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I missed something:
"I felt like that I no longer. I think got over it!"
It's not clear what you are saying... maybe it's this: "I felt like I no longer cared. I think I got over it!"
or maybe you are saying that the good feeling left you,
"That feeling went away. I think I got over it!"
"I felt like that I no longer. I think got over it!"
It's not clear what you are saying... maybe it's this: "I felt like I no longer cared. I think I got over it!"
or maybe you are saying that the good feeling left you,
"That feeling went away. I think I got over it!"
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Things become better and better
I went to my classroom and drew againBesides, the good news is that I felt like
Awesome. Careful with the past tense... " I'm " and " it's " are present tense and your story was written in the past tense.
It's cool you used the word "phenomenon", but I think the word "feeling" was a better choice of words. If you want to have that same impact of thought, you could have said, "Well, the feeling was phenomenal..." instead of "Well, it was a great feeling..."
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i agree with you, we should raise our heads up and go fofth taward our dreams.
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