A Great Journey [I prefer, "Memorable"]

The last summer I went to the beach. This travel was the best travel I've ever made done because I went it was made with my family and hence was a great experience, we had and adventure. We was were looking for a solitary quiet beach, and the way for arrived there was for a an unpaved road wasn't asphalted. and in this time Worse still, was the a rainy season made it a pain as , so the car jam was stuck many times and we had to push it out of the puddles. the car many times. That Now it sounds so was funny.

When we arrived, to the beach, It was beautiful because the scene was the spectacular view unfurled in quietude splendour to us.  and it was Just an empty beach separating us from only the sea and us. All We were happy althought even though the dificult trip was arduous.

Great piece!  Therefore I cannot resist but to polish it.  When you know something and write about it, it will always be beautiful.  Well done!

A great Journey

The last summer I went to the beach. This travel was the best travel I've ever done, because I went with my family and it was a great experience - we had an adventure. We were looking for a solitary beach and the way for arrived to get there was there was was difficult, because a road wasn't asphalted and in this time was a rainy season, so the car jammed many times and we had to push the car many times. That was funny.
When we arrived to the beach, it was beautiful, because the scene was spectacular and it was empty - only the sea and us. All were happy, despite the the dificult trip.

[Very good.  I'm glad you got there.]