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An Ugly Snowman. :D
Today, I had a wonderful time with my family. This Friday is the an official weekend holiday in Iran. and a The sunny day made all enticed the people to get out of their homes. So we got were stuck in a horrible traffic jam around 2 for about two hours. We couldn't go forward or back even for a meter budge an inch forward or back due to the . Because of traffic congestion. We were supposed to get out of leave/park our car where it was about 4 four kilometers far away from the ski resort. Although I couldn't cannot ski and ride or drive a snowmobile, I had a lot plenty of fun. :D
The fresh mountain air cleared my mind and I feel felt great. now. ;)
We made a snowman, then we slid and went inner-tubing on the snow by a tube. While we were sliding down by the tube, others threw us snowballs were thrown at us. I think, snow tubing was the most thrilling part. On our way back, the police blocked the roads for the cars which were coming to ensure smooth the traffic flow.
I took had brought along my camera but forgot to use it. take even a photo, so Hence I posted my last year's photo with our ugly snowman. I am in on the left side with holding a sandwich. in my hand. :D
Those little children tykes [more affectionately] are my cousins' children. :)
Good piece. Write what you know and what comes out is always beautiful.
An Ugly Snowman. :D
Today, I had a wonderful time with my family. Friday is the official weekend holiday in Iran, and a sunny day made all people everyone get out of their homes, so we got stuck in a horrible traffic jam for around 2 hours. We couldn't go forward or back even for a meter(US spelling)/metre (UK spelling). Because of traffic congestion, we (were supposed) had to get out of our car where it was, about 4 kilometers far away from the ski resort. Although I couldn't ski and or ride a snowmobile, I had a lot of fun. :D The fresh mountain air cleared my mind. I feel great now. ;)
We made a snowman, then we slid on the snow by on a tube. While we were sliding down by on the tube, others threw us snowballs at us. I think,snow tubing was the most thrilling part. On our way back, the police blocked roads for the cars which were coming in order to smooth the traffic flow.
I took my camera but forgot to take even a one photo, so I posted my (last year) photo with our ugly snowman from last year. I am in on the left side with a sandwich in my hand. :D
Those little children are my cousins' children. :)
Mountain air certainly did agree with you Sarah, excellent work just some word order changes really. Can almost see your confidence coming out of the page now! Well done. Snow tubing is great fun!
An Ugly Snowman. :D
Today, I had a wonderful time with my family. Friday is the official weekend holiday in Iran, and a sunny day made all people get out of their homes, so we got stuck in a horrible traffic jam around 2 hours. We couldn't go forward or back, even for a meter. Because of traffic congestion, we were supposed to get out of our car, where it was about 4 kilometers far from the ski resort. Although I couldn't ski and ride a snowmobile, I had a lot of fun. :D The fresh mountain air cleared my mind. I feel great now. ;)
We made a snowman, then we slid on the snow by a tube. While we were sliding down by the tube, others threw us snowballs at us. I think snow tubing was the most thrilling part. On our way back, the police blocked roads for the cars which were coming to smooth the traffic flow.
I took my camera, but forgot to take even a photo, so I posted my last year photo with our ugly snowman. I am in the left side with a sandwich in my hand. :D
Those little children are my cousins' children. :)
[Excellent. I've got to think of another word. I do cross-country skiing (or did). The place where I live is too warm for that.]
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