First notebook entry: Introducing myself
English is an essential part of my life. I hope with the help of this web-site I' ll find many interesting english-speaking people and have unforgettable conversations with them )))
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Very good job! The corrections are very minor.
-You don't actually need to add the 'that', but I think it makes the sentence a little clearer and easier to read.
-You don't need a space after the apostrophe in 'I'll'.
-Add commas to set off clauses like 'with the help of this website'. It makes your writing easier to read!
-Always capitalize the names of languages.
-Adding 'some' makes the sentence more natural. For example, I can say, "I want bananas," but it sounds a little forceful. It's more natural to say, "I want some bananas."
Your English seems great! Keep writing :)
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
English is an essential part of my life. I hope with the help of this website I' ll find many interesting english-speaking people and have unforgettable conversations with them )))0
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
English is an essential part of my life. I hope with the help of this website I' ll find many interesting english-speaking people and have unforgettable conversations with them.EXCELLENT
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