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Consumption of animal flesh. What if a respectable university or research institute said that the human body doesn't need animal meat to survive? Does this fact would make the consumer over? Maybe not, but people would have no reasons to continue doing so. Would it be worthwhile to continue consuming meat just to satisfy personal taste even if it means making animals suffer? The answer depends on how much would each one to sacrifice to prevent the suffering of others. Whoever is not willing, will surely try to find other justifications before acknowledging that "my desire exceeds my empathy for the animal". I think the guilt or pain is the difference between satisfaction and the injury which, consciously or not, we know we cause to do so. This may sound cruel but cruel truth is preferable to a cruel lie, because in truth we can build solutions to our iniquities.

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It would be a duplication if I try to correct your essay.  Bethany had done a great job.  However, I would like to point out that "eating meat" means we are consuming animal meat; not human.  This would be cannabalism.  There is a subtle difference in the meaning of "meat" and "flesh". Also, in this context, "animal" is redundant for "eating of animal meat".

 

Meat Consumption of animal flesh.

 

What if a respectable university or research institute said that the human body doesn't need animal meat to survive? Does this fact would make the consumer over? Maybe not, but people would have no reasons to continue doing so.

Would it be worthwhile to continue consuming meat just to satisfy personal taste even if it means making animals suffer? The answer depends on how much would each one to sacrifice to prevent the suffering of others.

Whoever is not willing, will surely try to find other justifications before acknowledging that "my desire exceeds my empathy for the animal".

I think the guilt or pain is the difference between satisfaction and the injury which, consciously or not, we know we cause to do so.

This may sound cruel but cruel truth is preferable to a cruel lie, because in truth we can build solutions to our iniquities.

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Consumption of animal flesh.

 

What if a respectable university or research institute said that the human body doesn't need animal meat to survive? Does Would this fact would make the consumer over change the consumer's mind? Maybe not, but people would have no reasons to continue doing so.

Would it be worthwhile to continue consuming meat just to satisfy personal taste even if it means making animals suffer? The answer depends on how much would each one would to sacrifice to prevent the suffering of others.

Whoever is not willing, will surely try to find other justifications before acknowledging that "my desire exceeds my empathy for the animal".

I think the guilt or pain is the difference between satisfaction and the injury which, consciously or not, we know we cause to do so by eating meat.

This may sound cruel but cruel truth is preferable to a cruel lie, because in truth we can build find solutions to our iniquities.

 

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