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Dear Diary No.2 Dumplings
Last Sunday, Beijing was snowing. It was so cold. However, I need to go outside, because my friend invited me to her house to ate for dumplings. Although the road was too dirty to walk, I was happy to see snowfall. I bought some fruits. Then, I took a quarter (a quarter of what?) to her house. We waited for another friend for more than half an hour. We began to eat as she arrived here. I ate too much many dumplings at lunchtime. Afterwards, I was going to help my friend to brush wash the dishes, but my friends refused.
We planned to go shopping in the afternoon. My sister forgot to bring her key, so I had to go home quickly. After I talked spoke with my friends, we used Wechat. Above all, I was very happy last weekend.
This picture is of I eat the dumplings I ate. If you would like, you are welcome to in Beijing.
上周日北京下雪了,天气很冷我需要外出。因为我的好友邀请我去她家吃饺子。尽管路面很脏不容易走,看到降雪我特别开心。我买了一些水果。之后用了十五分钟到她家。等了另外一个好朋友差不多半个小时。她一到我们就开始吃了。我吃了很多饺子。之后我准备帮她洗碗但是被我的好朋友拒绝了。本来我打算和她们一起去逛街的,但是我的姐姐忘记带钥匙了,我不得不立刻赶回家。然后我们用微信聊天来的。总之上周末还是很开心的。
这张照片是我吃的那一盘饺子,如果你喜欢,欢迎你来北京吃。谢谢帮助我修改文章的人。
Dear Diary No.2 Dumplings
Last Sunday Beijing it was snowing in Beijing. It was so cold however, but I still needed to go outside, because my friend invited me to her house to eat dumplings.(conjunctions are used to join clauses in a single sentence, not normally to start a new sentence) Although the road was too dirty slushy for walking safely to walk, I was happy to see snowfall. I bought (did you mean 'buy/bought', or 'brought' - if 'brought', it should be 'took') some fruit. Then I took a quarter??? of an hour walking to her house. We waited for another friend for more than half an hour. We began to eat as soon as she arrived there. I ate too much many dumplings (水饺?)at lunchtime. Afterwards I was going to help my friend to brush wash the dishes but my friends they (he/she) refused.
We planned to go shopping in the afternoon. My sister forgot to bring her key, so I had to go home quickly. After I talked with my friends used using Wechat. Above Over all, I was very happy last weekend.
This picture is I eat of the dumplings we ate. If you like, welcome to Beijing.
上周日北京下雪了,天气很冷我需要外出。因为我的好友邀请我去她家吃饺子。尽管路面很脏不容易走,看到降雪我特别开心。我买了一些水果。之后用了十五分钟到她家。等了另外一个好朋友差不多半个小时。她一到我们就开始吃了。我吃了很多饺子。之后我准备帮她洗碗但是被我的好朋友拒绝了。本来我打算和她们一起去逛街的,但是我的姐姐忘记带钥匙了,我不得不立刻赶回家。然后我们用微信聊天来的。总之上周末还是很开心的。
这张照片是我吃的那一盘饺子,如果你喜欢,欢迎你来北京吃。谢谢帮助我修改文章的人。
Dear Diary No.2 Dumplings
Last Sunday, It was snowing in Beijing was snowing. It was so cold however, I needed to go outside because my friend invited me to her house to eat ate dumplings. Although the road was too dirty to walk, I was happy to see snowfall. I bought some fruits. Then I took a quarter to her house. We waited for another friend for more than half an hour. We began to eat as she arrived here. I ate too much many dumplings at lunchtime. Afterwards I was going to help my friend to brush wash the dishes but my friends refused.
We planned to go shopping in the afternoon. My sister forgot to bring her keys, so I had to go home quickly. After I arrived home, I talked spoke with my friends used using Webchat. Overall Above all, I was very happy last weekend.
This picture is of I eat the dumplings I ate. If you like, you are welcome to come to Beijing.
Very good! I miss dumplings so much!
上周日北京下雪了,天气很冷我需要外出。因为我的好友邀请我去她家吃饺子。尽管路面很脏不容易走,看到降雪我特别开心。我买了一些水果。之后用了十五分钟到她家。等了另外一个好朋友差不多半个小时。她一到我们就开始吃了。我吃了很多饺子。之后我准备帮她洗碗但是被我的好朋友拒绝了。本来我打算和她们一起去逛街的,但是我的姐姐忘记带钥匙了,我不得不立刻赶回家。然后我们用微信聊天来的。总之上周末还是很开心的。
这张照片是我吃的那一盘饺子,如果你喜欢,欢迎你来北京吃。谢谢帮助我修改文章的人。
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