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Korean subway fighting I saw one video that is one old woman and one young girl fight. This video is started grandma said "These things? these things?", "Why did you sit with you legs cross?" and girl said "Who are you for me(? Don't go interfering in my business!" finally woman so angry. So she caught her hair! Young girl screamed! After few seconds, their fighting was ended. Young girl was so crying, and said "I don't like Korea... I don't like Korea..." then she called someone. Passengers talk to old woman "You'd better suppress, old person should suppress." Then old woman angry to them And she pushed her to side, and she go back her seat. Until young girl was crying. That was crazing situation. Maybe you are agreed. But that situation is not special. Because korean subway often happen passengers quarrel. Anyway we should analyse that social phenomenon. Korea is influenced by the Confucian culture. So age is very important. But young girl violate that custom. Recently these situation is growing. Of course that video couldn't show all situation. But we know young girl couldn't deal with the crisis or she is too badly girl and old woman couldn't deal herself. But I surprised another thing. Why didn't anyone stop them? They just said them "Please calm!, you guys same!" Of course they couldn't deal that situation well. But I think that is not nice action. I don't know all that situation so I can't say them badly. But maybe korean social have some problem. I saw that video's comments. The old woman is little famous that is crazy. She often provoke some quarrel. Maybe I have seem her too. So I can little understand young girl mind. But she told that saying is "I don't like Korea!". Then who is she? maybe she grew up in other country. Maybe so she couldn't deal that crisis. Anyway she is too young, She must not say it! She may feel Korea is other country. If not, we can't sympathy her. Between Crazy old people and no manners young people are conflict, korean is grown up in other country is have problem and themselves identity. Those are Korea can't deal problem for a long time. I live in US now. So those news is so sadly. I hope when I go back Korea, those problem is solved clearly! :D ===================================== Plz currect wrong sentence!

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Korean Subway  Fighting


I saw one video of this one old woman and
this one young girl fighting. The video is started with the older woman saying grandma said "These things? These things?", "Why did you sit with you legs crossed?" and girl said "Who are you to talk to me? Don't go interfering in my business!". Finally the older woman was so angry. She grabbed her hair! The young girl screamed! After few seconds, the fighting ended. The young girl was so crying, and said "I don't like Korea... I don't like Korea..." then she called someone. Passengers talked to old woman "You'd better calm down, you should calm down."

 

Then old woman angry was at them and she pushed her to the side and went go back to her seat. The young girl was still was crying.  < 난 추측했어요.  I guessed.

That was crazing
a situation. Maybe you are agreed. But that situation is not special because Korean subways often happen passengers often quarrel.  (or quarrel often).

 

Anyway we should analyze that social phenomenon. Korea is influenced by the Confucian culture. So age is very important. This young girl violated that custom.

 

Recently this kind of situation has been increasing. Of course that video couldn't show every kind of situation. But we know that either this a young girl couldn't deal with the crisis or she was just a rude girl talking to an old woman who couldn't deal herself.

 

But I was surprised something else. (Something else surprised me.) < also ok.

 

Why didn't anyone stop them? They just said to them "Both of you, please calm down!, you guys same!"

 

Of course they couldn't deal with that situation well. But I think was a bad situation.

I don't know all of those situations so I can't say that all of them are bad.

But maybe Korean social have some social problem.


I saw that video's comments. The old woman
has become little famous and that is kind of crazy. She often provokes some quarrel. Maybe I have seen someone like her too. So I can understand the mind of this young girl.


But
she said,  "I don't like Korea!". Then who is she? Maybe she grew up in some other country? Maybe so she couldn't deal that kind of crisis in any country? Anyway, she is too young and she shouldn’t have said that! She may feel Korea is different than her own country. If not, we can't sympathy with her.


As long as the crazy old people and the rude young people are in conflict, Koreans who have grown up in another country will continue to have a problem with their own identity. There are those who are Korean and can't deal with the problem. I live in US now. So that’s sad news. I hope when I go back Korea, those problems are completely solved!  


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The story was very amusing. :D I also want to add some corrections but they already said it. ㅋㅋㅋ Goodluck in your English! 화이팅~
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typical day in korea :P
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"ROFL" means Rolling On the Floor Laughing. =))
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ROFL?? What's mean??

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