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Driving
I like to drive my car, (because) it is very relaxing for me.
I don't like to drive very fast, so that I can see the landscape.
While I am driving I like to listen to relaxing music, and smell the sea or the mountain air, expecially in the Spring.
One day when I was driving alone in my car, I ran out of petrol and my car stopped on the road. Fortunately I was able to get to a service station and fill the tank. I was very happy and lucky.
I got a cup of coffee and a piece of cake and continued my trip. I took the fast lane and after 2 hours met my friends for our vacation nearby, at a mountain lake.
It was a good vacation and I learned always to check the petrol level of my car. Now I'm very attentive! (I would myself put it a little differently and say something like: "Now I really pay attention to how much petrol I have in my tank.")
To drive
I like to drive the cars because for me, it is very relaxing.
I don't like to drive too fast because like to drive no to fast, for to I like to see the landscape.
While I drive, I like to see listen to a relaxing music and smell the perfume of to the sea or the mountain, expecially in the spring.
One day when I was driving alone in my car, I ran out of gas finisched the fuel and my car stopped on the road. Fortunately I arrived at the service station, and I filled the tank. I was very happy and lucky.
I took had a cup of coffee and a piece of cake, and I took a cake and I continued my trip. I joined to the acceleration (fast) lane, and after 2 hours I met my friends for our vacation nearby the mountain lake.
It was a good vacation, and I learned to control the petrol level in my car. Now I'm very attentive!
**I'm glad that you were able to find gas so quickly! I liked reading this entry because it reminded me of how relaxing it is to take a drive when it's beautiful outside.
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