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In contrast, getting food from food banks conveys an entirely different message. that embodies It shows one’s poor background. lower social and economic status. The majority of food in food banks is provided by others. No doubt that those some donors want to assist the poor in from hunger while others have their own agenda. For example, supermarkets wanted to create a good image and a good way to dispose them before spoilage occurs and get a tax write off. [Your sentence is weak] However, this act of receviving and giving providers-and-receivers relationship revealsed a cruel reality of unequal food distribution of food among peoples. If you can afford The ability to eat fresh lobsters and steaks for you dinner or your refrigerator to stores more than the daily consumption of 4.3 pounds of food in the refrigerator reflects the status better than most every day, then you are better off than the numerous people living in the Third World countries. [When you write these kinds of essays, try to be neutral. Do you get personal. If you do, it shows that your arguments are baised.] Free trade accounts for this unbalanced distribution of food between among peoples and nations in the world. Brazil, for example, abounds in grows soybean which is not oriented to Brazilians, not for the local consumption but is exported for to Japanese and European markets. The majority of Brazilians are too poor to buy their locally growth grown food (Holly 2006:03).
In a word, from my viewpoint is that food distribution is driven entirely by the forces of economics. Government policies can intervened but no government is willing the give up the cash cow. the capitalists who have control over a country’s productive resources make this country poorer and poorer. [Again, who you wrote has a biased sounding. Hence no one will take your opinions seriously. This way, it sounds more objective and reasonable. The country (ie the government) does not become poorer, its people do.]
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