Writing a covering letter
Madam Caroline
I am writing to you regarding your advertisement for a teaching assistant in Primary School wich I have seen this morning on the message board of the University. I would like to submit an application for the post. Please find my CV attached.
An experienced as caretaker the children because I have got nine children and the are all very polite, clean and applied. I believe that I meet all requeriments you outline in your advertisement.
I like to teach and I am a good communicator with broad in knowledge of swimming, scuba diving, yoga, sailing, and computers: playground among other thing I think I am a good leader
I worked in School Saint George for two years and I had hands-on experience of teaching children.
If you require any further information or would like to arrange an interview email me at [email protected].
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Leandro
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I am not sure where the school is located but be aware that inn the UK, "Caretaker" means "Janitor", it is not someone who looks after children.
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Great introduction Leandro. I am impressed.
I think you should go into greater detail on the ...."swimming, scuba diving, yoga, sailing, and computers.
I think I am a good leader.
Think on it more deeply if you can and provide a little more detail about your skills and experience.
Where did you do these things? Who did you train under? What was your inspiration for doing these things.
Obviously you loved them, but tell the person you write to what served for your inspration.
You have a very positive introduction!
.--Bruce
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Writing a covering letter
Madam Caroline
I am writing to you regarding your advertisement for a teaching assistant in Primary School which I (saw) this morning on the message board of the University. I would like to submit an application for the post. Please find my CV attached.
(As an experienced caretaker, looking after nine children who are all very polite, clean and hard-working,) I believe that I meet all (the) requeriments you outline in your advertisement.
I like to teach and I am a good communicator with experience in teaching swimming, scuba diving, yoga, sailing, and computers. (I believe my experience has developed my leadership skills)
I (have) worked in School Saint George for two years and I (have) had hands-on experience of teaching children.
If you require any further information or would like to arrange an interview email me at [email protected].
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Leandro
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