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Weekend^^ Hi, everyone, it’s Ken23e. I’m very happy because the weekend has come. My wife is going for a drink with several PTA friends now. The drinking is called “Joshi-kai” in Japanese. “Joshi-kai” means just a drinking which consists of women only. After she left, we freely enjoyed out, such as playing Nintendo DS, watching YouTube, reading comics, playing on the internet and eating ice-cream.^^ Our children already fell asleep but later than usual. BTW, I read vol.1 of Bakuman comics a while ago. Of course from now, I’ll enjoy the rest of them.^^ Well, see you!! Please don’t hesitate to correct my notebook, I really hope you will. Thank you. みなさん、こんばんは、Ken23eです。週末になって、とてもうれしいです。今、妻はPTA友達数人と飲みに行ってます。その飲み会は日本語で”女子会”と呼ばれています。”女子会”とは女の人だけの飲み会のことです。妻が出かけた後、みんな好き放題してました。ニンテンドーDSをしたり、YouTubeを見たり、マンガを読んだり、ネットしたり、アイスを食べたり。＾＾子供たちはもう寝ましたが、いつもよりは遅く寝ました。ところで、さっきBakumanの1巻を読んじゃいました。もちろん今から残りも読みます＾＾ではまた！！ 遠慮なく訂正していただけるとうれしいです。よろしくお願いします。

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Now to add a third. I wonder if this will become habit! hehehe.

Weekend^^

Hi, everyone, it’s Ken23e. I’m very happy because the weekend is here. My wife is out with several PTA friends now. Alternatively Tonight is Joshikai for my wife and her friends  “Joshi-kai” means ladies night. (Some of my friends call their night "Team fight like a girl" lol) When she left, the kids and I enjoyed playing Nintendo DS, watching YouTube, reading comics, playing on the internet and eating ice-cream.^^ The children are asleep now but fell asleep later then usual. BTW, I read vol.1 of Bakuman comics. Now I’ll enjoy the rest of them.^^ Well, see you!!

Please don’t hesitate to correct my notebook, I really hope you will. Thank you.

みなさん、こんばんは、Ken23eです。週末になって、とてもうれしいです。今、妻はPTA友達数人と飲みに行ってます。その飲み会は日本語で”女子会”と呼ばれています。”女子会”とは女の人だけの飲み会のことです。妻が出かけた後、みんな好き放題してました。ニンテンドーDSをしたり、YouTubeを見たり、マンガを読んだり、ネットしたり、アイスを食べたり。＾＾子供たちはもう寝ましたが、いつもよりは遅く寝ました。ところで、さっきBakumanの1巻を読んじゃいました。もちろん今から残りも読みます＾＾ではまた！！
遠慮なく訂正していただけるとうれしいです。よろしくお願いします。
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Weekend^^

Hi, everyone, it’s Ken23e. I’m very happy because the weekend has arrived. My wife has gone for a drink with several PTA friends this evening now. The drinking (party) is called “Joshi-kai” in Japanese. “Joshi-kai” means just a women-only drinking party (or, girls' night out)  which consists of women only. After she left, we did what we liked, such as playing Nintendo DS, watching YouTube, reading comics, playing on the internet and eating ice-cream.^^ Our children have already fallen asleep, but later than usual. BTW, I read vol.1 of Bakuman comics a while ago. Of course from now, I’ll enjoy the rest of them.^^ Well, see you!!
Please don’t hesitate to correct my notebook, I really hope you will. Thank you.

Some small errors with verb tenses.
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Hi, Kyungmi. Thank you for your correction. I got it, and am going to use the right noun when I use "consist of" next time. But it sounds more smooth off without "consist of", does it? Thank you^^
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If you want to use 'consist of' in that sentence about Joshi-kai.. there should be another noun like a party, a meeting, or a group right before 'which'. --> “Joshi-kai” means a social gathering which consists of women only.

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