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6.000.000 Ding Ding Ding!! Spain has already reached six millions unemployed! How far can we go? How do our goverment deal with that problem? During 2012, the new goverment signed a new labour reform, which did cheaper lay off workers. What was the result? In 2012 had been destroyed near 1 million of jobs. On the other hand, every day news are published in newspaper about politicians charged with bribering or misapropriation. Moreover, they say us how we would do, work more, earn less and pay our tax. The worst of all, there aren´t any politician in jail because they protect ones each other.

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6.000.000

Ding Ding Ding!! Spain has already reached six millions unemployed! How far can we go? How do will our goverment deal with that problem?


During In 2012, the new goverment signed a new labour reform which did cheaper lay off of workers. What was the result? In 2012 had been At the same year it destroyed nearly 1 million of jobs. On the other hand, every day the news are published in newspaper are about politicians charged with bribery or misapropriation. Moreover, they say  tell us how we should do, to work more, earn less and pay our taxes.


The Worst of all, there aren´t any politician in jail because they are protecting ones each other.

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6.000.000

Ding Ding Ding!!
Spain has already reached the six millions mark for the number of people unemployed in this country! How far can we go?
How do will our government deal with that this problem?
During 2012, the new government signed passed into law a new labour reform which caused businesses to did cheaper lay off more workers.(I'm not sure exactly what you intended to say here) What was the result? In 2012 had there has been destroyed a loss of nearly 1 million of jobs.
On the other hand, every day news are published in newspapers are telling us about politicians charged with bribery or misappropriation of government funds. Moreover, they say keep telling us how what we would should do; work more, earn less and pay our taxes.
The worst thing of all is that there aren´t any politicians in jail because they all protect ones each other.

Well done César! A bit of rewording, spelling corrections and additions but all in all a very good text!  I really sympathize with your country's predicament.

Keep up your good work and I look forward to seeing your next post.

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Spain and Egypt have so much in common :(
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6.000.000

Ding Ding Ding!!
Spain has already reached six millions unemployed! How far can we go?
How did our goverment deal with that problem?
During 2012, the new goverment approved a new labour reform, which resulted in more layoffs (I'm not sure whether this is what you want to say). What was the result? In 2012, nearly 1 million jobs were lost.
On the other hand, every day news are published in newspapers about politicians charged with bribery or misapropriation. Moreover, they tell us that this is what we're supposed to do; work more, earn less and pay our taxes.
The worst thing, there aren´t any politicians in jail because they protect each other.

(I tried to do my best, and awaiting a native speaker for better corrections) :)

 

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