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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I have been learning in English for 3 years but I can't speak English very well. < 좋습니다!
My native language is Korean, and I've lived in Seoul, Korea for all my life//또는 my whole life.
I like to play the online game called, "World of Warcraft".
I have three children. A 14years old daughter, a 13 years old son and a 6 years old the other son.
I was born in 1971 and my wife is the same age as me///또는///as I am.
...and my wife and I are the same age. < 더 자연스러운 문장입니다.
I live with my parents. < 좋은 문장입니다.
So altogether, there are seven (people) in my (immediate) family.
I'm a beginner when it comes to learning English.
I'm a beginner English learner.
As an English learner, I'm (just) a beginner.
Sometimes,writing is easier than speaking, but of course both are (very) difficult to do. ....difficult for me (to do).
I hope that I can be a fluent English speaker one day.
I hope that one day I can speak English fluently.
First Notebook Entry: Introducing Myself
I have been learning in English for 3 three years, but I can't speak English very well.
My native language is Korean, and I've been living in Seoul, Korea for all my life.
I often enjoy the online game named: World of Warcraft.
I have three children: a 14-year old daughter, a 13-year old son, and a 6-year old the other son.
I was born in 1971 and so was my wife.
I live with my parents. Therefore, my family size is seven.
I'm at a basic level in English.
Sometimes writing is more easy than speaking; but, of course, learning only one of the two is not good.
I hope that I can be a fluent English speaker.
[Good luck & have fun!]
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