Awkward age

I am in this awkward age. I am concerned about my parents, but I do not want to tell them. I would like to spend more time with my parents but I am more eager to sit in front of the computer. I know what my parents want and what they said. But I don't know how to talk to them. I don't have patience for their out-of-date ways and opinions. My heart feels that my parents are getting older and even though I feel guilty, I still make them feel lonely with my behaviour.

Not bad, you need to keep practising and I am sure that you will gradually get much better. There are many ways this could be corrected as it is not entirely clear what did you exactly mean in some of the sentences. This is my version of the correction and I hope that you will find it useful. ;)

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[An] Awkward Age

Just I am in this awkward age. Concern I care for our my parents, but do not want how to say express myself. I would like to spend more time with my parents, them but am was more eager for to sitting in front of the computer. ; I know parents what they want and what they said, but I do not understand their old fashion ways. know their topic to howthen; I get impatient with them. their out-of-date. It pains my heart always to see my parents them getting on in years. I feel guilty that I do not spend time with them to make them feel less lder, but still in the guilt, but still give them lonely.