We watched a tiger today.
It was a cold but good weather today.
I and my sons went to the park.
The park is all free.
There are some animals there.
As soon as we arrived at there, my eldest son began to run.
He wanted to watch a tiger.
We watched a tiger for a long time.
We spent a good time today!
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We watched saw a tiger today.
It was a cold but good but the weather is nice today. I and my sons and I went to the park. The park is all There is no admission free. There are some animals there.
As soon as we arrived at there, my eldest son began to run. He wanted to see watch a tiger. So we watched a tiger one for a long time.
We spent a good time today!
There is a difference in meaning between "watch" and "see". When you find out the difference, the logic is the same for "hear" & "listen" and finally "talk" & "speak".
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Twan-san Thank you for comment and corrected my note.
They are Kan (3 years old) and You(1 years old).
When I introduce them I say 'They are Youkan!'.
Youkan is Japanese confectionery.
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Hello Tomo, how are you? Your entry for the most part didn't really need correction but I made a few minor corrections for you. By the way, how old are your sons and what are their names?
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We watched a tiger today...
It was a cold but good weather today.
My sons and I went to the park.
The park is all free.
There are some animals there.
As soon as we arrived at there, my eldest son began to run.
He wanted to watch a tiger.
We watched a tiger for a long time.
We spent a good time today!
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