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September blue^^; Hi, everyone, it’s Ken23e. I don’t like September in a way because I have to do my research report on Marchs & Septembers. Tomorrow is the limit day of the report submission, so I’m sure to be busy tomorrow. At the same time, every company will be busy at the end of 6 months period. Well, business aside, I already finished a weekly comic magazine “Shounen Sunday” today. BTW, I’ve been eager to read some Bakuman comics, but I haven’t started, yet. This sentence sounds familiar somewhere…^^; I’ll read them this weekend!! Well, good night^^ Please correct my notebook entry freely, I really hope so. Thank you. みなさん、こんばんは、Ken23eです。私は9月があまり好きではありません。3月と9月には研究報告書を提出しないといけないからです。明日がその提出期限ですので、明日は忙しくなりそうです。とは言っても、どこの企業も半期の終わりは忙しいでしょうけど。まぁ仕事のことはさておき、今日はすでに少年サンデーを読み終えました。ところで、Bakumanというマンガを早く読みたいのですが、まだなんです。この文章、どこかで見たことあるような・・・。^^;今週末こそ読むぞ~!!では、おやすみなさい。 遠慮なく訂正してもらえるとうれしいです。よろしくお願いします。

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こんばんは。Natishaです。I know 少しは日本語がです。I taught myself some basics a few years ago and Am learning spanish right now. I will continue my Japanese study afterwards. I would still talk English with you :) I am not a teacher or anything, just a native speaker. よろうしくおねがいします。

September blue^^;

Hi, everyone, it’s Ken23e. I don’t like September in a way because I have to do March and September's my research reports on Marchs & Septembers. (Unless you meant to say that you were writing a report on the months March and September) Tomorrow is the final  limit day to sumbit reports.of the report submission, so I’m sure to be busy tomorrow. At the same time, every company will be busy since it is at the end of the 6 months period. Well, business aside, I already finished a weekly comic magazine “Shounen Sunday” today. BTW, I’ve been eager to read some Bakuman comics, but I haven’t started yet. This sentence sounds familiar somewhere…^^; I’ll read them this weekend!! Well, good night^^
Please feel free to correct my notebook entry freely, I really hope so. Thank you.

みなさん、こんばんは、Ken23eです。私は9月があまり好きではありません。3月と9月には研究報告書を提出しないといけないからです。明日がその提出期限ですので、明日は忙しくなりそうです。とは言っても、どこの企業も半期の終わりは忙しいでしょうけど。まぁ仕事のことはさておき、今日はすでに少年サンデーを読み終えました。ところで、Bakumanというマンガを早く読みたいのですが、まだなんです。この文章、どこかで見たことあるような・・・。^^;今週末こそ読むぞ~!!では、おやすみなさい。
遠慮なく訂正してもらえるとうれしいです。よろしくお願いします。

This I cannot read. I know most of the hirigana but none of the kanji. w。^^
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September blue^^;

Hi, everyone, it’s Ken23e.
I don’t like September in a way because I have to do my research report on Marchs & Septembers.
-- I don't like September because I have to give my research report in every March and September.
>>> send in my research report .. (give/hand something in to somebody)  
 
Tomorrow is the limit day of the report submission, so I’m sure to be busy tomorrow.
-- Tomorrow is the deadline for the report (submission), so I'm sure that I'll be busy tomorrow.
>> so it's highly likely to be a very busy day. / so it's highly likely that I'll be very busy tomorrow.


At the same time, every company will be busy at the end of 6 months period.
-- Every company is busy at the end of the 1st and 3rd quarters, anyway.
>> I'm not sure if I can say "anyway" for とは言っても..  and about 半期 .. ^^;;;

Well, business aside, I already finished a weekly comic magazine “Shounen Sunday” today.
BTW, I’ve been eager to read some Bakuman comics, but I haven’t started, yet. (Better with no comma, I guess.)
This sentence sounds familiar somewhere…^^;
(>I think I heard this sentence somewhere.)

I’ll read them this weekend!! Well, good night^^
Please correct my notebook entry freely, I really hope so. Thank you.
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A 3rd version:

September blue^^;

Hi, everyone, it’s Ken23e. I don’t like September much because I have to do my March-September research report on Marchs & Septembers. Tomorrow is the deadline day for submitting the report submission, so I’m sure to be busy tomorrow. At the same time, every company will be busy as it is the end of the 6-months period.

Well, business aside, I already finished a weekly comic magazine “Shounen Sunday” today. BTW, I’ve been eager to read some Bakuman comics, but I haven’t started, yet. This sentence sounds somewhat familiar somewhere…^^; I’ll read them this weekend!! Well, good night^^

Please feel free to correct my notebook entry freely; I really hope you will. Thank you.


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