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It snowed yedterday It snowed in Tokyo yedterday. 东京昨天下雪了。 I was going to go to watch a movie(Les Miserables) with a friend,but because trains had stopped,I had no choice but to shut myself up in my room all day. I hate winter,It is too cold. 我本来跟朋友一起去看电影(悲惨世界)不过因为电车都不开了,所以我只能呆在家里。我真讨厌冬天,太冷了。 when I was young,I had lived in Aomori(it is a place of near Hokkaido) for 6 years,there is many snow in winter,and very cold though,but I really can't get used to cold. 虽然我小时候住在青森(北海道的下面)六年,那边冬天很冷而且下很大雪,不过我还是很怕冷。 Next life,I wanna·live in a warm place. 下辈子,我一定要住一个很暖和的地方。

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It snowed yedterday

It snowed in Tokyo yedterday.
东京昨天下雪了。

I was going to go to watch a movie(Les Miserables) with a friend,but because trains had stopped,I had no choice but to shut myself up in my room all day.
I hate winter,It is too cold.
我本来跟朋友一起去看电影(《悲惨世界》)不过因为电车全部停运,(全部停止运营)都不开了,所以我只能呆在家里。我真讨厌冬天,(因为它)太冷了。

when I was young,I had lived in Aomori(it is a place of near Hokkaido) for 6 years,there is many snow in winter,and very cold though,but I really can't get used to cold.
虽然我小时候住在青森(北海道的南面(我猜的,可能是别的方向)下面)(描述地理位置是东、南、西、北、东北、东南、西北等等)六年,那边冬天很冷而且(经常)下很大(的)雪,不过我还是很怕冷。

Next life,I wanna·live in a warm place.
下辈子,我一定要住(在)一个很暖和的地方。

DYsang 看到北海道这三个字我就开心。这篇文章依旧精彩。

我看到你在练习用“虽然”造句,一般我们用“虽然……但是……”。

很谨慎的给你修改,我想你一定明白这是为什么。哈哈。以上是粉丝的建议,望笑纳。

 

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It snowed yesterday

It snowed in Tokyo yesterday.
东京昨天下雪了。

I was going to go to watch a movie(Les Miserables) with a friend,but because the train had stopped,I had no choice but to stay in my room all day.
I hate winter,It is too cold.
我本来跟朋友一起去看电影(悲惨世界)不过因为电车都不开了,所以我只能呆在家里。我真讨厌冬天,太冷了。

 

Note: Shut oneself up in a room. Well that sentence is grammaticaly correct, but I personally think it doesn't really make sense. If you had to stay at home due to bad weather, I think it is better to say TO STAY

when I was young,I had lived in Aomori (it is a place of near Hokkaido) for 6 years,there is so much snow in winter,and very cold though,but I really can't get used to cold weather.
虽然我小时候住在青森(北海道的下面)六年,那边冬天很冷而且下很大雪,不过我还是很怕冷。


Note: Snow is uncountable like sugar, rice, oil. Therefore you say MUCH instead of MANY. Many is used for countable stuffs like chair, bed, shoes.

Next life,I wanna·live in a warm place.
下辈子,我一定要住一个很暖和的地方。

 

Ps. I haven't seen snow apart from the television. So if I go to a country with 4 seasons, winter is pretty much what I am looking forward to experience. ^^

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It snowed yesterday

It snowed in Tokyo yesterday.
东京昨天下雪了。

I was going to go to watch a movie (Les Miserables) with a friend, but because the trains had stopped, I had no choice but to shut myself up in my room all day.
I hate winter. It is too cold.
我本来跟朋友一起去看电影(悲惨世界)不过因为电车都不开了,所以我只能呆在家里。我真讨厌冬天,太冷了。

When I was young, I had lived in Aomori (it is a place of near Hokkaido) for 6 years. There is was many a lot of/much snow in the winter and it was very cold though. But I really can't get used to the cold.
虽然我小时候住在青森(北海道的下面)六年,那边冬天很冷而且下很大雪,不过我还是很怕冷。

Next life,I wanna·live in a warm place.
下辈子,我一定要住一个很暖和的地方。

 

I heard about all of Tokyo's snow on Chicago's news today. A lot of fun, but probably not so much for adults.

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>ariani I wanna go to Indnesia eat delicious Indnesian foods!na si goren!
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nice ! hope you can come to Indonesia soon :) I want to go to Japan someday, and I'll bring many clothes and jacket :D

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