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Notebook Entry I find that even if you do not have something interesting to write, you can still practice your writing, even by writing on commonplace and mundane things. Well, this will be a mundane one. I will try to describe how I packed my stuffs and prepared for the returning tomorrow. Yesterday, I slept at around 4p.m.. I stayed up late surfing the Internet and watching Youtube video. Have to admit that it is quite easy to become addicted to those hilarious talent show auditions. I know it is bad to laugh at others. However, I think it is just fine as well as you do not do it openly and publicly. Also, those talent shows are meant for entertainment. So, if anyone decides to audition for talent shows, they have to prepare to be laughed at by the audience. Am I not right? Haha. This is what I always speak to myself to reduce the guilt. The next day, I woke up at around 11 o'clock. After breakfasting, I rolled up my sleeves for the packing job. Before that, I had to prepare the boxes. I had to "construct" the boxes back to their original shapes. For the purpose, I had a pair of scissors, a indelible marker pen,a paper tape and a plastic tape. Firstly, I sealed the bottom of one of the boxes with the plastic tape. Secondly, I sealed its bottom again with the plastic tape, covering half of the left and right part of the first plastic tape. After finishing the box, I continued with the other two, one by one. Done! Now, it is the time to put the stuffs into the boxes. The three boxes were mainly for food, bags and books respectively. All right. Later, I sealed two of the boxes, one by one, like how I had done. The difference was that the first plastic tape was replaced by the paper tape so i could write my name on it. Later, I moved them to the storage space allocated for the students at the end of the corridor. The other one shall join its siblings tomorrow after I bid a temporary farewell to the college. Well, I think it is time to put an end to this boring entry as the writer himself now cannot endure the agony of writing it. Guess why I wrote this type of boring entry?

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I find that even if you do not have something anything interesting to write [or "any interesting thing to ..."], you can still practice your writing, even by writing on about commonplace and mundane things.

Well, this will be a mundane one. [Now you are using "well" appropriately because of context.  A hesitation for dramatic effect.]

I will shall try to describe how I packed my stuffs [there is no plural for "stuff".  It's already a collection of things] and prepared for the my returning home tomorrow. [I knew you are going home in your previous entry :).  Bon voyage]

Yesterday, I slept at around 4am p.m... I stayed up late to surfing the Internet and watching Youtube videos.

Have to admit that it is quite easy to become addicted to those hilarious talent show auditions. I know it is bad to laugh at others. However, I think it is just fine as well as if you do not do it openly and or publicly. Also, these talent shows are meant for entertainment purposes only. So, if anyone decides to audition for talent shows, they have to should be prepared to be laughed at by the audience. [I prefer, "they should be prepared to be made into fools by the audience"]

 

Am I not right? Haha. This is what I always speak to myself to reduce the my guilt. [or "any guilt of mine."]

The next day, I woke up at around 11 o'clock. After breakfasting, I rolled up my sleeves for the packing job.

Before anything else that, I had have to prepare the boxes. I had to "construct" revert/reconstruct the flat pieces the boxes back into their original shapes. For the purpose, Also I had needed a pair of scissors, a indelible marker pen for making indelible markings, a paper tape and a plastic tapes. Firstly, I sealed The bottom of one of the boxes must be reinforced /secured with the plastic tape. Secondly, I and finally sealinged its the bottom again with the plastic more paper tapes to covering half of the left and right parts of the first plastic tape. After finishing the box, I continued with the other two, one by one. Two more repetitions with the other boxes and I was done!
Done!

Now, it is the time to put my stuff into them; each containing mainly food, bags and books.   the stuffs into the boxes. The three boxes were mainly for food, bags and books respectively.

All right. Later, I sealed two of the boxes, one by one, like how I had done. The difference was that the first plastic tape was replaced by the paper tape so i could write my name on it. When all is done, the top is now sealed with a paper tape instead so that I can write my name and address on it.  There is a storage space allocated for student belongings at the end of the corridor.  The third box will join its two other siblings tomorrow after I had bid a temporary farewell to my friends.


Later, I moved them to the storage space allocated for the students at the end of the corridor. The other one shall join its siblings tomorrow after I bid a temporary farewell to the college.

Well, [You had used this trick before.  Too many is no good and its effect will be lost]  I think it is time to put an end to this boring entry as the writer its author himself now cannot endure anymore of this writing the agony of writing it.

Guess why I wrote this type of boring entry? [Not boring if it is written well. :) ]

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Perhaps. :)
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Sometimes I feel I need to write, no matter about the topic. Is this a form of addiction?
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I find that even if you do not have <something >(anything) interesting to write [or "any interesting thing to ..."], you can still practice your writing,< even> by writing <on >(about) commonplace and mundane things.

Well, this will be a mundane one. [Now you are using "well" appropriately because of context. A hesitation for dramatic effect.]

I <will >(shall) try to describe how I packed< my stuffs> [there is no plural for "stuff". It's already a collection of things] and prepared for <the >(my) returning( home )tomorrow. [I knew you are going home in your previous entry :). Bon voyage]

Yesterday, I slept at around 4(am)< p.m.>.. I stayed up late (to) surfing the Internet and watch<ing >Youtube videos.

Have to admit that it is quite easy to become addicted to those hilarious talent show auditions. I know it is bad to laugh at others. However, I think it is just fine <as well as >(if )you do not do it openly< and> (or) publicly. Also, these talent shows are meant for entertainment( purposes only). So, if anyone decides to audition< for talent shows>, they <have to> (should be) prepared to be laughed at by the audience. [I prefer, "they should be prepared to be made into fools by the audience"]

 

Am I not right? Haha. This is what I always speak to myself to reduce the( my) guilt. [or "any guilt of mine."]

The next day, I woke up <at> around 11 o'clock. After breakfasting, I rolled up my sleeves for< the >packing< job>.

Before (anything else) <that>, I <had>( have )to prepare the boxes. I had to <"construct"> (revert/reconstruct the flat pieces)< the boxes >back into their original shapes.< For the purpose>, (Also )I <had>( needed) a pair of scissors, a <indelible >marker pen (for making indelible markings, )<a> paper <tape> and <a> plastic tapes. <Firstly, I sealed >The bottom of <one of >the boxes (must be) (reinforced /secured) with the plastic tape.< Secondly, I >(and finally sealing)<ed its> (the) bottom <again with the plastic> (more paper) tapes to cover<ing half of >the left and right parts of the first plastic tape.< After finishing the box, I continued with the other two, one by one. >(Two more repetitions with the other boxes and I was done!)
)<Done! >

Now, it is the time to put (my stuff into them; each containing mainly food, bags and books. )<the stuffs into the boxes. The three boxes were mainly for food, bags and books respectively. >

(When all is done, the top is now sealed with a paper tape instead so that I can write my name and address on it. There is a storage space allocated for student belongings at the end of the corridor. The third box will join its two other siblings tomorrow after I had bid a temporary farewell to my friends.)


[You had used this trick before. Too many is no good and its effect will be lost] I think it is time to put an end to this boring entry as <the writer >its author himself <now >cannot endure (anymore of this writing)< the >agony <of writing it.>

 

I just add some small changes for keeping the entry in text fileformat.

I have some questions about how to pack, I will write it  later.

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Typo: 4 a.m..

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