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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am learning English language, because I want to live in London or Los-Angeles. My native language is russian language, and I grew up in Russia. Well, I don `t know what to write, you better ask!

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Hello! У вас все тоже очень хорошо, но правельнее будет так: только надо сказать "Russian", а не "russian language" или еще так: только не "russian language" а просто "Russian." Я хочу сказать вам, что у вас очень хороший русский! Обращайтесь если что)) Well, I don `t know. Сertainly because USA is country of opportunities.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English language, because I want to live in London or Los-Angeles.
My native language is rRussian language, and I grew up in Russia.
Well, I don`t know what to write, so you better ask!

 

Good job!  It's just Los Angeles, no hyphen.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English language because I want to live in London or Los Angeles.
My native language is Russian language and I grew up in Russia.
Well, I don`t know what to write, you had better ask!

 

[Good start.  You don't need a comma before 'and'.  Hope to hear more from you]

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Привет - вы пишете всё хорошо, только не надо сказать "russian language" а просто "Russian." Почему вы хотите там жить?

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