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박정현 -"바람소리 속에 그대가" A few months ago I tried to translate these song lyrics. Can you tell me if the translation is correct? 박정현 - 바람소리 속에 그대가 "You In The Sound Of Wind" 바람 소리 속에 그대가 숨 쉬네 날 떠나간 그대 아직 내 곁에 있네 눈 감고 뜰 때마다 그대가 보이고 따듯한 햇살을 맞으면 낯익은 손길을 다시 만나죠 포근했던 그댄 늘 내 곁에 있네 364일 동안 잘 견뎠지만 단 하루 그대가 떠오르면 온 시간이 멈춰.. 온 마음이 무너져.. 바람 소리 속에 그대가 보이네 햇살처럼 그댄 내 곁을 비추네 ------- Among the sound of the wind you breathe The day is leaving and you are still beside me I close my eyes and every time I can see you in the garden and When the warm sun feels right, it is like I am holding onto a familiar hand again, isn’t it? I once felt comfortable, because you were always beside me For 364 days I endured this well, but if you emerge for a single day All of time comes to a halt…my whole heart shatters Amid the sound of the wind you can be seen Like the sunlight you are by my side shining

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날=나를 so.. You leaving from me are still beside me. (Is this right grammer in English? XD)

감고 뜰 때마다 --> Whenever I close and open my eyes. The base form of "뜰" is "뜨다". The garden should be removed.

포근했던 그댄 늘 내 곁에 있네 --> You made me comfortable are always beside me. (my opinion)

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