我今天什么做。
今天是星期天，九月二十六日。我不工作。 早上我很来了所以我睡觉很多！我不懒惰 因为星期我很忙.
早上我学习在我的朋友家。我的朋友们是很聪明!他们教 和帮助我.
还今天我去购买食品. 我厨子晚饭. 我喝一个啤酒. 今天我很高兴和平衡.
图片:我的好朋友们.他们很聪明! 我们是学生.
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我今天做什么。
今天是，九月二十六日星期天。我不用工作。 早上我很来了所以我睡觉很多！我并不懒惰今天很睡觉 因为我平日很忙.早上我在我的朋友家学习 (why is this at the end of the sentance rather than after I.. ?)。我的朋友很聪明!他们教 我帮助.
(why does the sentence not begin with Hai?) 今天我还去买了菜.今晚是我做的晚饭. 我喝一瓶啤酒. 今天我很高兴.
图片:我的好朋友们.他们很聪明! 我们是同学.
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还今天我还去购买食品.购物了。（购买食品is so formal,so i'd like to suggest you using this phrase---购物，购is short for 购买，物 means stuff，because it's in the past tense,so 了 is needed. for another example,try to distinguish this ,"i am eating"---我（正在）吃饭and "i've done eating."我（已经）吃饭了。can you tell the difference?）我厨子晚饭(alex,what's your meaning?are you trying to say,"i cooked supper"?so maybe you just put the wrong pinyin.the answer is zuo--forth tone--做,so this sentence is supposed to be 我做了晚饭。）. 我喝了（remember past tense.)一个瓶（the pinyin is ping---sencond tone,up,means bottle.hehe,i know,this is so difficult,but if everyday you remember one ,then can know all.i'll tell you more later.)啤酒. 今天我很高兴和平衡(dear sister,what does this mean?it means balanced .it doesn't make sense.maybe you put the wrong pinyin,you are trying to say"i feel peace in my heart",peace is 平和---ping he,both sencond tone.).
图片:我的好朋友们.他们很聪明! 我们都（dou-first tone,means both or a couple of people)是学生.
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actually, your Chinese can be understood when talking with Chinese people though a little strange.
as i said before, it seems foreign Chinese. :)
i think you must be a diligent student.just" cheer up, gear up, never gonna give up.."haha
i'm looking forward to your progress in your next essay..
:)
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我今天什么做。我今天做了什么（you made the same mistake as in your last essay. As i said last time, maybe you should pay more attention to chinese word order. in English, you will say what i have done,but in Chinese , we often change the order, that is, 做什么。)
今天是星期天，九月二十六日。我不工作。 早上我很来了所以我睡觉很多（我睡了很多觉！well, same mistake here, you mean sleep a lot, right, but in Chinese, we usually don't use it this way, we put the adjective before the noun.睡很多觉)我不懒惰 因为星期（maybe you mean this week, so you'd better put a "this这"before week星期。因为这星期我都很忙。is more coherent than before, and by the way, i add, 都before 很，that sounds more authentic in Chinese. we often use this expression in this way）我很忙.早上我学习在我的朋友家。(may i ask, did you use google to translate this sentence, because that really sounds foreign. it should be 早上，我在我朋友家学习。）我的朋友们是很聪明的!（you'd better add 的in the end of this sentence, because 聪明 is an adjective)他们教 和帮助我.
还今天我去购买食品(今天我还去购买食品 还is put behind suject 我）. 我厨子晚饭（厨子is a noun in Chinese, but here we need a verb. you made the mistake maybe because cook in English can be used as a verb or a noun.but in chinese, it's not the case.). 我喝一个(瓶）啤酒(一瓶啤酒，in English, we usually use a before a noun, but in Chinese, different things have different "a" , for example, 一个人，一瓶酒，一杯茶，etc） . 今天我很高兴和平衡. (平衡？do you mean balanced? what's kind of feeling it is?well ,anyway, that make sense.:)
图片:我的好朋友们.他们很聪明! 我们是学生.
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他们教 和帮助我. ("They tought and helped me".there are two verbs in this sentence,what you do is just translate them simply into chinese,when translate this two english verbs into chinese,that is 教 帮助，so similar the meaning is,both describing the same thing,am right?so it will be better to say---他们帮助我学习）
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