Larry Crowne and 西多士

I keep on watching the movie 'Larry Crowne' with Tom Hanks and Julia Roberts over and over again without any subtitles. In fact, next time is will be the the 4th times. If you have read my awesome diary in here, then you already know that I'm between jobs. To tell you the truth, I can't let bygones be bygones about his promise last month yet; but I want to step forward in my life like (the way I did with) English, that's why I'm seeking my new job, and touching (practicing) English as much as I can. By the way, Larry Crowne, acted Tom Hanks, is hired his job which as a retail manager, and afterwards he decides to go to college in order to find his a new job and life, like me, though in case of me I exclusively stay-at-home. now, then He takes a subject that how to speech class, and his first class's topic is 'French Toast'. Suddenly, when I saw that scene, I remembered when I had worked in Hong Kong 6 years ago. One of my co-workers took me a cafe in Hong Kong, then he ordered a very sweet French Toast. afterword he said "this is you." I asked him "Why not?" He answered "Your Name is Saito, we say call this 'Saito-shi(西多士)' , that's why you are french toast as for to us." I've memorised only two Cantonese words 'Saito-shi' and 'Nei-ho' 'Ni-hao' (Hellow) '.

Hehe. Keep it up! You're English has really improved over the past few weeks :)
Like david said, watch out for run-on sentances. 

Larry Crowne and 西多士

I keep on watching the movie 'Larry Crowne' with Tom Hanks and Julia Roberts over and over again without any subtitles. In fact, next time will be the 4th time. If you have read my awesome diary on here, then you already know that I'm between jobs. To tell you the truth, I can't let bygone be bygone about his promise last month yet, but I want to step forward in my life, like with English. (There are many other possibilites for this sentence, but this works) That's why I'm seeking a new job, and touching ("practicing," "speaking," "writing in") English as much as I can. By the way, Larry Crowne, acted played by Tom Hanks, is hired for a job as a retail manager. Afterwards, he decides to go to college in order to find his new job and life like me, although in my case of me I stay at home exclusively. (Consider rephrasing this sentence) Then he takes a speech course, and his first class's topic is "French Toast." When I saw that scene, I suddenly remembered when I had worked in Hong Kong 6years ago. One of my co-workers took me to a cafe in Hong Kong and ordered very sweet French Toast. Afterword he said "this is you." I asked him "Why?" He answered, "Your name is Saito, and we say this: "Saito-shi(西多士). That's why you are french toast as for to us." I memorized only two Cantonese words: "Saito-shi' and 'Nei-ho (Hellow)."

Larry Crowne is an excellent movie! 

Recommended study topics: how to avoid "run-on" sentences.

Larry Crowne and 西多士

『幸せの教室』とフレンチトースト
 

I keep on watching the movie 'Larry Crowne' with Tom Hanks and Julia Roberts over and over again without any subtitles.

トム・ハンクスとジュリア・ロバーツの映画『幸せの教室』を字幕なしで何度も繰り返し観続けている。

In fact, next time will be the 4th time.

実際、次回が4回目になる。

If you have read my awesome diary on here, then you already know that I'm between jobs.

もしあなたがここでの僕のひどい日記を読んでくれていたら、もうすでに僕が失業中であることをあなたは知っている。

To tell you the truth, I can't let bygones be bygones about his promise last month yet, but I want to step forward in my life, like with English.

本当のことを言えば、僕は先月の彼の約束についてまだ水に流せてはいない、しかし、僕は生活を、英語を同じように前に進めたいんだ。

That's why I'm seeking a new job, and writing in English as much as I can.

だから、僕は新しい仕事を探しているし、できるだけ多く英語を書いている。

By the way, Larry Crowne, played by Tom Hanks, is hired for a job as a retail manager.

ところで、トム・ハンクス扮するラリー・クローニは小売りの管理者としての仕事を解雇される。

Afterwards, he decides to go to college in order to find his new job and life just like me, although in my case I stay at home exclusively.

その後、彼は、ちょうど僕のように、新しい仕事と人生を見つけるために単科大学に行くことを決断する。僕の場合は、家にいること専門だけれど。

Then he takes a speech class, and his first class's topic is "French Toast." 

それから彼はスピーチのクラスを選択し、最初の授業での項目は、『フレンチトースト』。

When I saw that scene, I suddenly remembered when I had worked in Hong Kong 6 years ago.

そのシーンを観たとき、突然僕は6年前香港で働いていたときを思い出した。

One of my co-workers took me to a cafe in Hong Kong and ordered a very sweet French Toast. 

同僚の一人が僕を香港の喫茶店に連れていってくれて、とても甘いフレンチトーストを注文した。

Afterword he said "this is you." I asked him "Why?" He answered, "Your name is Saito, and we call this: "Saito-shi(西多士). That's why you are french toast to us."