I love watching /FRIENDS/ Friends and hope we can be friends!

Hey guys, I'm glad to join this with you.

I am Liv and I am from China. My passion is music, photography,(add one more comma when you list things - it's called the oxford comma, look it up) and English.
Speaking of the most I like,definitely,learning English. (just a bit unclear. try this?)

Of these things, I like learning English the best.
You know what? In other words, (unnecessary)
What I wanna do most is improving improve my English, because I like watching american tv series! It's a good way to relax when I am tired.

Friends is one of my favorite shows!

When I watch this it, I feel like into this I feel like I am living it with them. I love the way they talk, they hang out with other people, (oxford comma) and the way they express themselves. They say whatever they wanna say and do whatever they wanna do. For me, That show do encourage encourages me to complete my life, my behaviors, (comma) and myself.
This show is more like a window to show me another to a world I have never been.
I adore the relationship between Monica and Chandler, and I also hope I can find a guy like Chandler soon. They moved me and I am so grateful about that.
Maybe watching this show over an over again is the best way to express my love?LOL~then I will tell you I have watched this five times at least~~!

Thanks for watching all my blahblah..What I want to say is I love English and hope I can get well with you guys get to know you guys well.

And If you wanna learn Chinese, without doubt, come to me! I will let you know help you with whatever you wanna know.

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And I love Friends, it is an amazing show! Good look on English, you are well on your way :)