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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hi~! Nice to meet you~ thanks to enter my space. I'm looking for friends to develop each other~ I'm intersted in singing and watching movies and soap opera. I really hope that I make a coversation with you~!! If you study korean, I can help you. I worked Korean Language Education Center in Sogang Univ. as a assistant student. So I can help you to study korean. So, don't be afraid~~~~ and e-mail me, pleases. thanks to read it~!!

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi~!
Nice to meet you~
thanks for  entering my space.
I'm looking for friends to develop who want to get to know each other~
I'm interested in singing and watching movies and soap operas. I really hope that I make can have a coversation with you~!!
If you study korean, I can help you.
I worked in the Korean Language Education Center in Sogang Univ. as a assistant student - so I can help you to study korean.
So, don't be afraid~~~~
and e-mail me, please.
thanks for reading my notebook entry~!!


안녕!~

This was a really good entry, I just changed a few things to make them sound more native. (I'm British, so if you'd prefer a more American correction, just tell me ^^). What sort of movies do you watch? I always try to go to the cinema at least once every 2 weeks (:.

Good luck with your English studies!

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi!
Nice to meet you.
Thanks for entering my space.
I'm looking to making some friends. (developing some friendships)
I'm interested in singing and watching movies and soap operas. I really hope that I can talk with you~!!
If you study Korean, I can help you. 
I worked at a Korean Language Education Center in Sogang University as a  student assistant so I can help you to study Korean.
So, don't be afraid~~~~
and e-mail me, pleases.
thanks to for reading this!

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Hi~!
Nice to meet you~
thanks for  entering my space.
I'm looking for friends who wanna get to konw each other~
I'm interested in singing and watching movies and soap operas. Especially, I really like singing!!!I
I was a vocal of high school band.
I really hope that I can have a coversation with you~!!
If you study korean, I can help you.
I worked in the Korean Language Education Center in Sogang Univ. as a assistant student - so I can help you to study korean.
So, don't be afraid~~~~
and e-mail me, please.
thanks for reading my note entry~!!
 

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi~!
Nice to meet you~
thanks to enter my space.
I'm looking for friends to develop each other~
I'm intersted in singing and watching movies and soap opera. I really hope that I make a coversation with you~!!
If you study korean, I can help you.
I worked Korean Language Education Center in Sogang Univ. as a assistant student. So I can help you to study korean.
So, don't be afraid~~~~
and my e-mail is [email protected]
thanks to read it~!!

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