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i hope life i am a chinese girl , my mother and my father all Business,i love my family,i hope lift is my parents all healthy and i can speak good english,i am very hard.

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I have a wish

I am a chinese girl, my parents both do business. I love my family, I wish my parents healthy forever and myself be a fluent english speaker, I'm a hard-working girl. (*^__^*)

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My wishes

 

I am a chinese girl. 

My mother and my father, my parents, they all in business.

My wishes are that my parents are all healthy and I can speak English fluently.

(Because)I try very hard.

 

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Good try here! You should say, I try very hard or maybe - it (English) is very hard. Both my mother and my father are in business. When you said "lift is my parents" did you mean to say "life" instead of "l i f t". Or maybe, did you mean "l i f t" (to raise up)? If you meant "l i f t" as in to raise up, maybe you meant that you hope your parents' health raises up to be good health for now and in the future. When you said: I am very hard, a good way to say that would be: it is very hard for me. And yes, you do sound like a very hard-working girl (*_*) :) Have a good day.

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