Corrections · 9
我以为今年最后一个星期的工作不忙,可是我错了!
因为同事都已经回来家了,我以为这个星期我的工作就会比较闲没有很多工作。可是恰恰相反我做的工作反而做得很多更忙!我的天啊!所以本来上个周末我是休息的,因为太忙,所以我没上网在iTalki。但是这个星期我终于有时间了!
(I have a feeling the word order in my title in wrong, I've been trying to learn to get it right. I am trying to say "I thought the last week of work this year would not be busy, but I was wrong!")
Merry Christmas!
Hello!
I didn't understand the connection between the certain contexts. (A good chinese writing not only contain no mistakes in one sentence,but the clarity in the contexts is also very important.)
I don't know if my correction express what you really want to say.
我以为今年最后一个星期的工作不忙,可是我错了!
(因为)同事已经回来(了)家,(所以)我以为我没有很多工作,可事实上,我要做很多做工作!我的天啊!所以(因为)上个周末我休息的,(所以)我没上iTalki,但是这个星期我有时间!
We may use many different ways to express the same meaning,but we should choose the way which is the most fluent to say.
Well Done!
-Susan
我以为今年最后一个星期的工作不忙,可是我错了!
因为同事已经回家,我以为我没有很多工作。可是我工作还是做了很多!我的天啊!所以上个周末我休息的。我没空上iTalki.但是这个星期我有时间!
(I have a feeling the word order in my title in wrong, I've been trying to learn to get it right. I am trying to say "I thought the last week of work this year would not be busy, but I was wrong!")
我以为今年最后星期的工作不忙,可是我错了!
因为同事已经回来家,我以为我没有很多工作。可是我做工作做得很多!我的天啊!所以上个周末我休息的。我没上网在iTalki.但是这个星期我有时间!
(I have a feeling the word order in my title in wrong, I've been trying to learn to get it right. I am trying to say "I thought the last week of work this year would not be busy, but I was wrong!")
我以为今年最后一个星期的工作不忙,可是我错了!
因为同事已经回家了,我以为我没有很多工作要做。可是需要我做得工作却很多,我的天啊!所以上个周末我没有休息,没上网在iTalki。但是这个星期我有时间!
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