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我以为今年最后星期的工作不忙,可是我错了! 因为同事已经回来家,我以为我没有很多工作。可是我做工作做得很多!我的天啊!所以上个周末我休息的。我没上网在iTalki.但是这个星期我有时间! (I have a feeling the word order in my title in wrong, I've been trying to learn to get it right. I am trying to say "I thought the last week of work this year would not be busy, but I was wrong!")

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我以为今年最后一个星期的工作不忙,可是我错了!

因为同事都已经回来家了,我以为这个星期我的工作就会比较闲没有很多工作。可是恰恰相反我做的工作反而做得很多更忙!我的天啊!所以本来上个周末我是休息的,因为太忙,所以我没上网在iTalki。但是这个星期我终于有时间了!

(I have a feeling the word order in my title in wrong, I've been trying to learn to get it right. I am trying to say "I thought the last week of work this year would not be busy, but I was wrong!")

 

Merry Christmas!

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Hello!

I didn't understand the connection between the certain contexts. (A good chinese writing not only contain no mistakes in one sentence,but the clarity in the contexts is also very important.)

I don't know if my correction express what you really want to say.

我以为今年最后一个星期的工作不忙,可是我错了!

(因为)同事已经回来(了)家,(所以)我以为我没有很多工作,可事实上,我要做很多做工作!我的天啊!所以(因为)上个周末我休息的,(所以)我没上iTalki,但是这个星期我有时间! 

We may use many different ways to express the same meaning,but we should choose the way which is the most fluent to say.

 

Well Done!

-Susan

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我以为今年最后一个星期的工作不忙,可是我错了!

因为同事已经回家,我以为我没有很多工作。可是我工作还是做了很多!我的天啊!所以上个周末我休息的。我没空上iTalki.但是这个星期我有时间!

(I have a feeling the word order in my title in wrong, I've been trying to learn to get it right. I am trying to say "I thought the last week of work this year would not be busy, but I was wrong!")

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我以为今年最后星期的工作不忙,可是我错了!

因为同事已经回来家,我以为我没有很多工作。可是我做工作做得很多!我的天啊!所以上个周末我休息的。我没上网在iTalki.但是这个星期我有时间!

(I have a feeling the word order in my title in wrong, I've been trying to learn to get it right. I am trying to say "I thought the last week of work this year would not be busy, but I was wrong!")

我以为今年最后一个星期的工作不忙,可是我错了!

因为同事已经回家了,我以为我没有很多工作要做。可是需要我做得工作却很多,我的天啊!所以上个周末我没有休息,没上网在iTalki。但是这个星期我有时间!

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Hi, we always have lots of work at the end of the year, I have to say that you are really wrong this time. :( But look for the bright side, we will have the New Year Holidays soon, only six days later! BTW, we just survived from the doomsday (Dec.22nd 2012), whether should we celebrate this? :D

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