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My name is Giao.i come from vietnam, i begin learn english.i have a little essay about my life but it has many grammar mistakes.all people help me.
My day begin wake up at 7:00AM and go to school after sign up face book.The afternoon, i am seen wanderring around the street to looking for interesting things, and i go back home to eat and run some errands.Next i go to bookshop near there.This is own relax time.in here, i looking for some books and read it in bookshop.i can read very fast.but the bookshop don't provide seat for customer.it close up at 10:00 PM.Sometime, i go to walk around in the park, i can see children play games and all people go to walk foth. The atmosphere is very funny.I uasualy make friend with people.At night,before go to bed i always write joural.That is my one day.

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My name is Giao. I come from Vietnam(Or I am Vietnamese). I have started to learn English. I wrote a little essay about my life, but it has many grammar mistakes. Anyone help me?
My day begins( or you could say starts) at 7am when I wake up for school and sign into Facebook. In the afternoon I am seen wandering the streets looking for interesting things. Then (or you could say later or afterwards) I go home to eat and run errands. Afterwards I go to a bookshop nearby. This is me time. I look through the books and (if I find one I like) read (it) in the bookshop. I am a very fast reader however the shop does not provide(have) seating for customers and it closes at 10 pm. Sometimes I go for a walk in the park where I can see children playing games and lots of people to going for a walk(?). It's a very fun atmosphere. I usually make friends with people. Before I got bed at night I always write in my journal. That is my day.

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My name is Giao.  I come from Vietnam. I am a beginning learn English student.

I am going to write have a little short essay about a day in my life. I am afraid that it will have many but it has many grammar mistakes.  all people Please help me.

My day begins when I wake up at 7am :00AM and go to school after sign after checking up on Facebook, off to school I go.  In the afternoon, I am seen wanderring around the street to looking for interesting things, and i before going back home to eat and for lunch and to run some errands.  Next Then I go to a nearby bookshop near there.This is own relaxation time.  in here, i looking for some to read interesting books and read it in bookshop.I can read very fast but the bookshop bookstore don't provide do not have seating for customer. It closes up at 10pm:00 PM.  Sometimes, I go to walk around in the park where I can see children at play games and others in their leisure all people go to walks forth. The atmosphere is very peaceful.  funny.I uasualy Usually I make friends with them people.  At night,Before going to bed, I always write a page in my journal.  That is my one Today is one such day for it.

You will never regret if you keep writing your diary or journal.  I have been keeping one since I was 12.  Of course today, it is all typing into the computer.  I miss my handwriting days.

First I shall correct the mechanics of your language and then the next one for grammar, etc

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My name is Giao.__I come from Vietnam, I begin learn English.__I have a little essay about my life but it has many grammar mistakes.__All people help me.
My day begin wake up at 7:00AM and go to school after sign up face book.The afternoon, i am seen wanderring around the street to looking for interesting things, and i go back home to eat and run some errands.Next I go to bookshop near there.This is own relax time.In here, I looking for some books and read it in bookshop.__I  can read very fast.__but the bookshop don't provide seat for customer.__It close up at 10:00 PM.__Sometime, I go to walk around in the park, I can see children play games and all people go to walk foth. The atmosphere is very funny.__I uasualy make friend with people.__At night,before go to bed i always write joural.__That is my one day.