Bad Autumnal Equinox Day
Hi, everyone. In Japan, today is a public holiday called "Shuubun No Hi” (=Autumnal Equinox Day), but we had to work, because it's a working day in our company. In addition, we are supposed to have a workshop tomorrow. I fainally finished my powerpoint at 10pm. Not only today but also this Saturday, are working day... No!! Anyway, I'll get through tomorrow!!
Well, bye^^
みなさん、こんにちは。今日は日本では”秋分の日”という休日ですが、私の会社では出勤日となっているので会社に行かなければなりませんでした。しかも、明日は研究発表会があります。夜の10時にやっと資料を作り終えました。今日だけでなく今週の土曜日も出勤日です・・・ガーン。とにかく明日は頑張ります！！
ではさようなら。
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Hey, this is really good! Almost perfect! I'd just change one thing. I had to look this up:「are working days」か「is a working day」のどちらが正しいかと調べました。すると、これ：
http://gtotd.blogspot.com/2007/06/not-only-but-also.html
I think I will recommend this:
"Not only is today a working day, but so is this Saturday."
I love the "No!!" and then I laughed when I saw it was 「ガーン」! Another good choice would have been "Ouch!"
Last comment: if you use the = sign, we won't know how to pronounce it. Try this:
"...a public holiday called Shuubun No Hi, which is Japanese for Autumnal Equinox Day, ..."
Hi, everyone. In Japan, today is a public holiday called "Shuubun No Hi” (=Autumnal Equinox Day), but we had to work, because it's a working day in our company. In addition, we are supposed to have a workshop tomorrow. I fainally finished my powerpoint at 10pm. Not only is today a working day, but so is this Saturday
Well, bye^^
みなさん、こんにちは。今日は日本では”秋分の日”という休日ですが、私の会社では出勤日となっているので会社に行かなければなりませんでした。しかも、明日は研究発表会があります。夜の10時にやっと資料を作り終えました。今日だけでなく今週の土曜日も出勤日です・・・ガーン。とにかく明日は頑張ります！！
ではさようなら。
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Bad Autumnal Equinox Day
Hi, everyone. In Japan, today is a public holiday called "Shuubun No Hi” (=Autumnal Equinox Day), but we had to work, because it's a working day in our company. In addition, we are supposed to have a workshop tomorrow. I fWell, bye^^
みなさん、こんにちは。今日は日本では”秋分の日”という休日ですが、私の会社では出勤日となっているので会社に行かなければなりませんでした。しかも、明日は研究発表会があります。夜の10時にやっと資料を作り終えました。今日だけでなく今週の土曜日も出勤日です・・・ガーン。とにかく明日は頑張ります！！
ではさようなら。
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