First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am an out-going girl. I like reading, singing. And I think sleeping is also a kind of interests. As a graduate student, I want to be employed by a foreign co

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am an out-going girl. I like reading, singing. And I think sleeping is also a kind of interests. As a graduate student, I want to be employed by a foreign company. Because I want to go abroad. My family is not rich enough, so I haven't chances to go out. I just want to go out to see the world according to my hardworking.

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Your English is pretty good, a few things to look out for when writing is that you will almost never start a sentence with the work "And". Also the sentence "Because I want to go abroad" is what we call an incomplete sentence. The reason is because if you start a sentence with the word "Because" there needs to be another part afterward. For example: Because I am American, I speak English. I hope this helps.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am an out-going girl. I like reading, singing, and I also think sleeping is kind of interesting. As a graduate student, I want to be employed by a foreign company. I want to go abroad, but my family is not rich enough, so I haven't had chances to go out. I just want to go out to see the world according to my hardwork.

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