The movie "Up"

I saw the movie "Up"

Up is the story of Mr Carl Frederiksen, a 72 year old balloon salesman.
When Carl was a chid, he met a girl whom he eventually married. Her name was Ellie. 
Ellie always dreamed of visiting South America, but died before having the opportunity to travel. Carl, then became a bitter man.

Carl decided to fulfill a promise to his wife. He tied thousands of helium balloons from the chimney of the house and flew away towards South America.

When he was in the air, he realized that Russel was on the portch of the house and let him stay. 
In their adventure, the two battled beasts and bandits. Finally, at the end, the house landed back down to earth, where Carl became friends with russell.

Creo que suena mejor si todo está en el mismo tiempo.
Como todo en el pasado.
Si vas de pasado a presente, se suena raro.
Tambien, "history" es mas como historia de Peru, historia del mundo. Pero, "story" es mas como un cuento.
Muy bien, nada más cosas chiquitas que te faltó.
Espero que te ayude un poco.

the movie "Up"

I saw the movie " Up"

Up is the history of Mr Carl Frederiksen, he is a 72 year old ballons seller. 

When Carl was a child he met a girl who he eventually married. Her name was Ellie. 
Ellie always dreamed of visiting South America, but died before having the opportunity to travel; Carl became a bitter man

Carl decides to fulfill a promise he made to his wife. He ties thousands of helium balloons to his house through the chimney and flies away towards South America.

When he's in the air he realizes that Russell is on the porch of the house and lets him.
In this adventure, the two battle beasts and bandits. At the end the house settles in place (in South America?) and Carl becomes friends with Russell.

Overall your English is very good, there were only minor errors except for "the projec does brinds"  I couldn't figure out what that meant sorry.  Remember to always start proper nouns with a capital letter.