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Lemonavenue's correction is superb and I cannot do better. However, by your request, I can correct it differently so that you can compare the different styles.
My New Hairstyle
Yesterday,I On a whim, I to changed my hairstyle.__ ,I don't know what I was thinking then! that this is the most wrong thing for me, It is too ugly so dreadful that ashamed to see people,I cannot be seen like this. Don't know what to do. Perhaps an investment into do not know how to do,should I to go buy a wig?
My hairstyle
Yesterday, on a whim, I decided to change my hairstyle. I think that this was a mistake. I believe it is unflattering, so much so that I am ashamed to be seen by anyone. I do not know what to do. Should I to go buy a wig?
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