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Life... In life we have many different roads and we have to be wise for choosing the best for us. There are people who can´t choose one by themselves but their parents choose the road that they wanted when they were younger. There are also people who doesn´t have any idea which road to choose and they choose the same road of their partner or some close friend and they don´t think anymore. Also, there are people who thinks life is just a game where they play. Or simply, there are people who makes their own life complicated. I feel represented in people who chooses the road where we pursue dreams and we know that we aren´t alone in this world. We live day by day what God gives us and we get strong in the hardest moment of our life. And you, who you are? Which road did you choose?

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In Life...

 

In life we have many different roads to cross and we have to be wise common sense for to help us chooseing what we believe is the best for us.

There are people those who can´t choose one cannot decide for by themselves but because of their tender age and therefore need their parents. choose the road that they wanted when they were younger. Then there are also people some who doesn´t have any no idea which road to choose at all and they choose chose the same familiar road of their partner or some close friend and so that they don´t have to think at allanymore. Also, there are people who thinks  Some think that life is just a game where they play. Or simply, and finally, there are people those who makes their own life their lives even more complicated.

I feel represented in people that I am in the group who which chooses the road where we pursue that will lead us to our dreams. and we know that We aren´t are never alone in this world. We live day by day and use the best what God had given gives us.  and We get are strong in when we face the hardest moment of our life.

And you, who you are? Which road did would you want to take choose?

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Life...

In life we have many different roads and we have to be wise for in choosing the best for us (better to say "ourselves", but either is ok).

There are people who can´t choose one by themselves but their parents choose the road that they wanted when they were younger (correct but ambiguous, to make it clear that 'they' is the parents, you could say "they themselves"). There are also people who doesn´t don't (people is plural, so it's "don't" - remember, he/she doesn't, they don't) have any idea which road to choose and they choose the same road of as their partner or some close friend and they don´t think about it anymore (otherwise you are saying that they don't think at all, about anything!). Also, there are people who thinks think (third person plural, so think not thinks) life is just a game where which they play. Or put (not strictly necessary, but sounds much better) simply, there are people who makes make their own life lives complicated.

I feel represented in people who chooses the road where we pursue dreams and we know that we aren´t alone in this world. We live day by day what God gives us and we get strong in the hardest moment of our life.

And you, who you are are you? Which road did you choose?

 

Well done! This makes good sense, we might normally use 'path' instead of 'road' in this context, but this is well written :)

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buen pensamiento !!

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