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I'm really expecting to travel one last time in 2012
I thought (i would )to spend (enjoy) this year.
Many things happened to me. some happy, some unkind...many things.
The best accident (maybe use the word coincidence ? because accident is usually used for bad occurence ) is that a new family (member ) will appear soon.
I'm very flutter (maybe you mean excited?)I'm very excited
I'm also planning to travel to jeju in this last week.( maybe "i am also planning to travel to Jeju the last week of this month)
Maybe it will be my last trip in 2012. I'm really looking forward to this,
I will be eat many delicious foods..like holse meat and fork meat(<--sorry this part i dont understand ^^ ) . and Galchi
and take many photos...
This trip may be the last trip I take in 2012 and the last one in my 20's . (I'm 29 years old)
thank you
PINK= Sugestions
yellow= corrections.
Hope I helped at least a little.
By the way good Job and enjoy your trip to Jeju ~~~
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