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Traditional celebration in Colombia Today, December the seventh, "El Día de las Velitas" is celebrated in all Colombia. This tradition consists of lighting some candles at night and praying. It is customary to go out to the streets in order to see the public lighting installed by the government because of Christmas. I think it is an excellent opportunity to pray by our friends and family. This light represents hope in a new beginning; it is like the fire that everyone has in their heart and motivates them to continue fighting for their dreams and the well-being of their relatives. If you want to celebrate this tradition, regardless of your religion, you could buy a simple candle and to light it at night. Look at the fire and think about your family and dreams with all your soul. Next year, your family will be healthy and your dreams will come true, but, don't forget that you have to do your best everyday and to do good to your neighbor. P.S. Happy "Día de las Velitas" for everyone. Enjoy your families and celebrate this Christmas in peace and cheerful. :D

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Traditional Celebrations in Colombia

Today, December the seventh, "El Día de las Velitas" is celebrated allover Colombia. This tradition consists of lighting some candles at night and praying. It is customary to go out to the streets in order to see the public lighting arranged/set up by the government in celebration of Christmas.

I think it's an excellent opportunity to pray for our friends and family. This light represents hope in a new beginning; it's like the fire that everyone has in their heart and motivates them to continue fighting for their dreams and the well-being of their relatives.  (or, "it's like the fire that's in everyone's heart.. " but your version isn't incorrect.)

If you want to celebrate this tradition, regardless of your religion, you could buy a simple candle and to light it at night. (or, "you can simply buy a candle... ") Look at the fire and think about your family and dreams with all your soul/heart. Next year, your family will be healthy and your dreams will come true, but, don't forget that you have to do your best everyday and to do/be good to your neighbor.

P.S. Happy "Día de las Velitas" to everyone. Enjoy your families and celebrate this Christmas in peace and cheer/joy. :D

 

 

Really good! Red means it was a mistake, blue means it's optional/more natural sounding. =)

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This is a beautiful tradition, thank you for sharing! =)
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Thanks Linda. I am glad that you like my entry. I hope we can talk very soon. :D
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Traditional celebration in Colombia

Today, December the seventh, "El Día de las Velitas" is celebrated in all of Colombia. This tradition consists of lighting some candles at night and praying. It is customary to go out to the streets in order to see the public lighting installed by the government because of Christmas.

I think it is an excellent opportunity to pray for our friends and family. This light represents hope in a new beginning; it is like the fire that everyone has in their heart and motivates them to continue fighting for their dreams and the well-being of their relatives.

If you want to celebrate this tradition, regardless of your religion, you could buy a simple candle and light it at night. Look at the fire and think about your family and dreams with all your soul. Next year, your family will be healthy and your dreams will come true, but, don't forget that you have to do your best everyday and do good to your neighbor.

P.S. Happy "Día de las Velitas" for everyone. Enjoy your families and celebrate this Christmas in peace and cheer.  :D

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I loved this writing about your special holiday. I wish I had read it last night. But of course I can light a candle and pray tonight (and every night!). Thanks for submitting such a beautiful entry.

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