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Don´t be rude. It makes people get sad.
I have had waited for better days. Nowadays Lately, people have been so rather impolite. Once Recently, I talked to a teenager whom I met here in on this website. At first, He was so cool, but then one day he treated me so very badly. He said horrible things for to me and about my English. I really ca´t cannot understand thatkind of people who behave this way. Actually, I see, that, feel it is important that people must be more gentle with each other. Especially here, where we are here for to learn.
Notes:A) In English when we title something, e.g. your notebook entry's name. We use capital letters for each "important" word. Small words like a, and, the do not get the "special" treatment. Here is how I would have written your title, "Do Not Be So Rude! You Are Making People Sad."
B) Try to avoid using the same word over and over again. In this instance you used the word "so" three times. In each instance there are better word choices. Varying one's vocabulary will help to avoid sounding boring or uneducated (think of how a Valley Girl speaks).
Remember: You cannot worry about making mistakes. We all make them. Making mistakes is what makes learning fun! And if someone is a being a jerk, an obnoxious person, you do not have to communicate with them. If they are behaving very badly I suggest you report them.
Don't be rude; it makes people get sad.
I have been waiting for better days. Nowadays people have been are so impolite. Once, I talked to a teen who I met here on this site. At first, he was so cool, but one day he treated me so badly. He said horrible things for to me and about my English. I really can't understand that kind of person people. Actually, I see that people must be more gentler with each other; we are here for learning. (to learn)
gentler = more gentle
Não existe 'more gentler'
So sorry to hear that Connie. Your spoken English is good. Take no notice. If someone is rude you must disconnect immediately.
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