Feeling blue today

I viewed my profile today, and somehow the number 27 has had been (changed to)/become (选一个就行了） be 28. hahah... yeah, right, that's my age.

I'm suddenly feeling more blue and stressful stressed (stressful是形容做一件事的感觉， 比如说 Doing work is stressful, 但是你要是想形容自己的感觉/感受， 你就应该用stressed). I do want to make my life better in all aspects, but is that easy? I don't like people to pushing me, it's tough to laugh in front of people after they try to play a caring role in my life. I appreciate they show so much care for me, but I feel stressful stressed and I (如果在这里不加I的话这句会有点奇怪）kind of hate that.

I feel like when I grow older, I just become more childish, andweaker and lazier (你列出事的时候， 到最后一个事， 只用逗号， 然后就可以用and). 0_0;;; hahah... And now I am "on sale" by my parents, my relatives, friends and whoever. It's kind of funny and sad! 

I assume there will be people who (如果你在这里不加who, 会有点像英语中式 嘻嘻）do not understand what I am talking about, haha... but never mind, I just want to write something to blow my blues （blow my blue feelings away， 我觉得这样写会更好的） away.

I'm glad that I am not South Korean (你写的句子没有错误， 但只是韩国人有这件事， 你要是住在那里的话， 到一月一号的时候你 will not become a year older (不知道这个中文怎么说  哈哈哈)) in South Korea now, or else when January 1, 2013 comes/arrives, I will be/become 30 right away. ⊙︹⊙;;; haha... no offense. Thanks for reading, just have fun! :)

Feeling Blue Today

I viewed my profile today, and somehow the 27 had been changed to be 28. hahah... Yeah, right, that's my age.

Suddenly I'm feeling more blue and stressful. I do want to make my life better in all aspects, but is that easy? I don't like people to push me, it's tough to laugh in front of people after they try to play a caring role in my life. I appreciate they show so much care for me, but I feel stressful and kind of hate that.

I feel like when I grow older, I just become more childish and weaker, and lazier. 0_0;;; hahah... And now I am "on sale" by my parents, my relatives and friends, whoever. It's kind of funny and sad!

I assume there will be people do not understand what I am talking about, haha... but never mind, I just want to write something to blow my blues away.

I'm glad that I am not in South Korea now, or else when January 1, 2013 comes, I will be 30 right away. ⊙︹⊙;;; haha... No offense. Thanks for reading, just have fun! :)

Your writing has very few errors.  Well done!

Feeling blue today

I viewed my profile today, and somehow the 27 had been changed to be 28. hahah... yeah, right, that's my age.

Suddenly feeling more blue and stressful. I do want to make my life better in all aspects, but is that easy? I don't like people to push me, it's tough to laugh in front of people after they try to play a caring role in my life. I appreciate that they show so much care for me, but I feel stressful and kind of hate that.

I feel like when I grow older, I just become more childish and weaker, and lazier. 0_0;;; hahah... And now I am "on sale" by my parents, my relatives and friends, whoever. It's kind of funny and sad! （Do me a favor, and ask them what your price is!)

I assume there will be people who do not understand what I am talking about, haha... but never mind, I just want to write something to blow my blues away.

Glad that I am not in South Korea now, or else when January 1, 2013 comes, I will be 30 right away. ⊙︹⊙;;; haha... no offense. Thanks for reading, just have fun! :)

(没有关系，你就是大小马）