Please correct my writing :)

Hello~ I am translating my friend's paper who is an army nurse. These are the choices of the questions on her survey to her patients. Please correct my errors. Thank you :)




- It was difficult to accept the diagnosis of my current condition.

- It is possible that in the future my current condition will deteriorate or relapse.

- It was difficult to accept the fact that I was wearing a cast

- I think there is a possibility that I will have a secondary disability caused by my current condition (eg. muscle & joint atrophy, bone deformities, gait disturbance, etc.)

- I think early detection and treatment of a disease is helpful for the recovery. 

-I do not think my condition will get better in a short time.

-I think my current condition will affect me in my day-to-day life and my military life.

-If my condition persists, it will affect my future

-I think my condition affects my family members.

-I think this disease will affect my family life or military life

-I think I will recover from my condition more rapidly if I do muscular and joint exercises regularly.

-I think I can have a normal life if I follow the doctor’s instructions and continue with the muscular and joint exercises.

-I believe that if I do muscular and joint exercises routinely, I can be free from the fear of secondary disabilities (eg. muscle & joint atrophy, bone deformities, gait disturbance, and so on)

-I believe my condition can be completely cured through a regimen of therapy and exercise. (or you could just say through therapy and exercise. The word 'regimen' isn't really used that often. I think it might be a latin word)

-I think communicating with doctors and nursing officers who explain both the need for exercise, and the best exercise techniques has helped me to do it. To be honest I don't know what a nursing officer is. Maybe in American culture they don't exist. Possibly it is a person who is both a registered nurse and a military officer.) Depending upon what you mean, 'motivated' could be a more exact word than 'helped'. To be motivated to do something means to have the will to do it.
  
-It is difficult to do muscular and joint exercises.

-I think that even though I do muscular and joint exercises and follow the doctor’s instructions, I will not be able to continue normal everyday life.

-I think that even if I do muscular and joint exercises hard I will have a secondary disability anyway (eg. muscle & joint atrophy, bone deformities, gait disturbance, and so on)

-I have pain and distress when I do muscular and joint exercises.

-I think my condition cannot be cured even through treatment and exercise.

This is my corrections, for what it's worth. I'm American and am only a few classes away from a college degree so I must be at least partially right. I think here you are almost certainly talking about more than one exerciese, so I pluralised it. Except in the last sentence, where it sounds better singular. Again, I'm just going on what sounds right to me, but because I'm a native speaker this is almost always grammatically and semantically correct, according to the rule of US standard english.

- It was difficult to accept my diagnosis. the result of the diagnosis of my current condition. 

- I believe think my current condition could can deteriorate or relapse in the future.

- It was difficult to accept the fact that I have to wear was wearing a cast

- I think there might be a possibility that I will develop a have secondary disability caused by my current condition I have (eg. muscle & joint atrophy, bone deformities, gait disturbance, etc.)

- I think early detection and treatment of a disease is helpful toward for the recovery

-I don't think my condition will get cannot get better in a short time.

-I think my current condition will affect my everyday and military life.

(The effect on military life was already listed above)

-If my condition persists, it will affect my future

-I believe think my condition affects my family members.

-I think this disease will affect my family life or military life

-I think I can my condition can be recovered faster if I do muscular and joint exercises regularly steadily.

-I think I can readjust to have normal life if I follow the doctor’s instructions and keep doing muscular and joint exercises.

-I believe that if I do muscular and joint exercises persistently, I can be free from the fear of secondary disabilities (eg. muscle & joint atrophy, bone deformities, gait disturbance, and so on)

-I believe my condition can be completely cured through a therapy and exercise.

-I think communicating with doctors and nursing officers who explained the necessity need of exercise and how the way to exercise helped me to do it.

-It is difficult to do muscular and joint exercises.

-I think that even though I do muscular and joint exercises and follow the doctor’s instructions, I will not be able to continue with the normal, everyday life.

-I think that even if I do muscular and joint exercises hard I will develop have a secondary disability anyway (eg. muscle & joint atrophy, bone deformities, gait disturbance, and so on) anyway.

-I experience have pain and distress when I do muscular and joint exercises

-I don't think my condition cannot will be cured, even through the treatment and exercise.

You did a really good job!  My corrections aren't perfect, and I would definitely recommend asking for a second opinon :) Good luck!

I believe think my condition will affects my family members.