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Wild Voices! Are you hearing these wild voices? Screaming! Yes, let it scream! It has no remedy but screaming! I fear! When I saw how indifference these eyes were seeing you, I feared! Completely empty of any feeling! How much cruel! Let this soul scream! It has no remedy! Hesitation: I wonder how much the author of my life's book loved this damn word that put it in each line of this book! Thousands time! Thousands time! Contradiction: "I" means contradiction, I eventually figured out the meaning of I! Let it scream! It has no remedy but screaming! It is mad; I saw the proof, yesterday! I fear from these cruel eyes! Disappearing: I love it! Let it scream! Tired! sigh!

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Wild Voices!

Are you hearing these wild voices?

Screaming!

Yes, let it scream! It has no remedy but by/through screaming!

I fear!
When I saw how indifferencet these eyes were seeing you, I feared!
Completely empty of any feeling!
How much cruel!
Let this soul scream! It has no remedy!



Hesitation:
I wonder how much the author of my life's book loved this damn word that he put it in each line of thise book! ('this' may refer to 'that damn word')
Thousands time! (Thousand times?)
Thousands time!






Contradiction:
"I" means contradiction, I eventually figured out the meaning of I!




Let it scream! It has no remedy but by/through screaming!
It is mad; I saw the proof, yesterday!

I fear from these cruel eyes!





Disappearing:
I love it!




Let it scream!


Tired!
sigh!

Please note that they are just suggestions and not corrections. (indifferent-don't like to scream :) )

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Ending is awesome! Well, I am a silent type :D
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Thank you very much ZQQ for your comment :)))
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wow, cool .
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Thanks Jeff,GOod night. :)

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