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Finally finished reading an English novel. I finished reading an English novel yesterday, its name is Dear John. I started the reading 3 months ago, hahha... finally finished! I worte a notebook entry 2 months ago, it says I cannot concentrate on reading books, and can fall asleep very easily while reading, haha... so please don't be surprise, that's my bad habit, haha... The story is about John and Savannah, who loves each other very much. But since John's leave is over and need to go back to the army which is stationed in Germany, and Savannah needs to continue her study in university, so they just write to each other to share their love and lives. But one day, Savannah write a letter to John, to tell him she is in love with another man, that means she wants to break up with John. After the separation, John prolongs his service, and Savannah married her best friend Tim, but Tim is critically ill. All of them live a tough life, John wants to help them, so he sells his father's coin collection in a lower price than it's true value, and gives an anonymous donation to Tim and Savannah...... I watched the movie with the same name before, and love it so so much! So I bought the novel to see what the original is about. I found the two ends are totally different, but both are reflect true love. The end of the movie says after receiving the donation, Tim has an operation and can live one more month, but still he is dead, John and Savannah finally can be together. And the end of the noval says after receiving the donation, Tim has an treatment, and he finally recover, he and Savannah live a happy life, but John is still alone and loves Savannah. Both the ends are sad but happy, and reflect true love! I missed some important plots, I cannot retell all of them to you, but I just want you to know both the movie and the novel are good and touched! They are worthy to be watched and read. :) Cheer for true love! :) I really don't know what tense to use when retelling a song or a book. O_O;;; Somebody please help! Thanks a lot! Have a nice day! :)

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Finally finished reading an English novel.

I finished reading an English novel yesterday called Dear John. I started the reading 3 months ago, hahha... finally finished! I know I wrote a notebook entry 2 months ago saying that I cannot concentrate on reading books, and that I can fall asleep very easily while reading, haha... so please don't be surprised, that's just my bad habit, haha...

The story is about John and Savannah, who loves each other very much. But since John's leave is over and need tomust go back to the army which is stationed in Germany now that his leave is over, and Savannah needs tomust continue her study in university studies, so they just write to each other to share their love and lives instead. But one day, Savannah writes a letter to John, to tell him she is in love with another man, that which means she wants to break up with John. After the separation, John prolongs his service, and Savannah marries her best friend Tim, but there's another twist - Tim is critically ill. All of them As a result, Savannah and Tim live a tough life, but luckily John wants to help them. John sells his father's coin collection in a lower price than its true value, and gives an anonymous donation to Tim and Savannah......

I watched the movie with the same name before, and love it so so much! So I bought the novel to see what the original is about. I found the two ends are totally different, but both are reflect true love. The end of the movie says after receiving the donation, Tim has an operation and lives one more month, but still dies in the end. Afterwards, John and Savannah finally get back together. However, in the novel version, Tim recovers after the treatment so he and Savannah live happily ever after. John is left alone, still loving Savannah, as a result. 

Both the ends are sad but happy, and reflect true love! I missed some important plot points, I cannot retell all of them to you, but I just want you to know both the movie and the novel are so touching! They are both worthy to be watching and reading :) 

Cheer for true love! :)

I really don't know what tense to use when retelling a song or a book. O_O;;;
Somebody please help! Thanks a lot! Have a nice day! :)

平常,past 或 present tense 都可以,但是就要主意你只用一种时态 (make sure you only use one tense). 比如,如果你开始用过去时(past tense)描述电影,就必须继续用过去时;不能换成present tense了。

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谢谢你!小猫 ^_^ You, too.
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I'm not Cupid,but I can sure you will have a true love:)
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呵呵,真爱这回事,我只是嘴上说说,从没试过。是不是执着,我也不清楚,只是对感情的一种奢望。至于有没有机会,等过完今年再说。:D
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俺对你无语,你是为爱而生,为爱而?你可真执着。

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