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First notebook entry: Introducing myself My Lady you were the most important woman in my history before the leaving of this year you're now...the most impoertant woman after the birth of this year you're a woman i can't count it with hours and days you're a woman made of the poetry nectar and from the Dreams' Gold you're a woman were living in my **** before a million year

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Dear, you were the most important woman in my life before you left this year.
And you still are you're now...the most important woman to me.
I can't count it with hours or days how important you were to me.
you're a woman made of the poetry nectar and from the Dreams' Gold  < don't understand
You're a woman were who will live in my heart for a million years.


My Lady is from a gothic novel...or turn of the century poem.
Lucky gal!   Ha ha.  Very romantic.

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It sounds perfect to me...

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