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feel a little frustration i have spent so much time on the last diary ,but no one give me a mend or something.even i don't know why .maybe the last diary is too long ..but there isn't a comment at all,not alone mending...i am a freshman here,so i should make more friends and do more contribution to others. last but not the least ,i take very serious to last diary,which is my memior more or less.i hope some warm-hearted people to mend it or give some comments..

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Feeling a little frustrated

I have spent so much time on the last diary entry, but no one give me a mend tried to edit or proofread it. or something. even I don't know why this happened. Maybe the last diary was too long... but there isn't a comment at all, let alone mending a correction... I am a freshman still a beginner here, so I should make more friends and do more contribution contribute more to others.
Last but not the least, I put a lot of effort into my last diary entry.  It's more or less my memoir. I hope Hopefully, some warm-hearted people can try to edit it or comment on it.  to mend it or give some comments..

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Okay. =)
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AMY,i have to say something to clarify myself..there are some mistakes .when i wrote this essay,there were no modification about last diary ..but some warm-hearted peolpe modified it when you saw it .he(or she )really did a great job,and i appreciate it sincerely.so this is the fact .i do hope someone to correct my diary anyway,which is always full of mistakes. have a nice day .
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When someone else already corrected your entry and it seems that the person who corrected you done a great job at it, I won't be correcting it for you because it's already good ! =) Oh, does this entry count? Should I correct you? Or you just simply want to express yourself?
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jeff,thank you for reminding me of this..i guess you r all right ..也許是我太心急了。 there will be more and more friends just like you around me ,only if i would do more contribution to others,talk more ,and write more.嘿嘿。。

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