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My first travels I was born in Kyrgyzstan, so my first travels was in that country. We often went to the mountains at weekends, mostly in summer. As russian poet Vladimir Vysotskiy said "only mountains where you never was could be better than the mountains" ("лучше гор могут могут быть только горы, на которых еще не бывал"). Tien Shan is very beautiful place. We were in different valleys, walking along the rapid rivers, exploring waterfalls. Cool spring water is more delicious when you get it directly from the spring, breathing fresh mountainous air full of fragrance of the meadow herbs! And of course I was at the lake Issyk Kul many times. It is big salty lake among the mountains. It has both rocky and sand beaches. This lake is visited not only by people from Kyrgyzstan, but from Kazakhstan too, because it is close to the border. Once I was in Kazakhstan, in Almaty. There were beautiful flower fields of red, violet and yellow colors along the way.

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My first travels

I was born in Kyrgyzstan, so my first travels was in that country.
We often went to the mountains at weekends, mostly in summer.
As russian poet Vladimir Vysotskiy said " only the mountains where you have never been  was could be better than the mountains that you have been " ("лучше гор могут могут быть только горы, на которых еще не бывал"). Tien Shan is a very beautiful place. We were in different valleys, walking along the rapid rivers, exploring waterfalls. Cool spring water is more delicious when you get it directly from the spring, breathing fresh mountainous air full of fragrance of the meadow herbs!
And of course I have been was at the lake called Issyk Kul many times(the same mistake shows again). It is big salty lake among the mountains. It has both rocky and sand beaches. This lake is visited not only by people from Kyrgyzstan, but from Kazakhstan too, because it is close to the border.
Once I was in Kazakhstan, in Almaty. There were beautiful flower fields of red, violet and yellow colors along the way.

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i can make some modifications in ur story.but i do know i am not a native person who speaks english. and by the way, now i also live in Moscow на стации метро Выхино.
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It sounds beautiful! Apart from the United States I've only been to Japan. I want to travel more though!!
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I alwo was born in Kyrgyzstan, but unfortunately, my famile was forced to run away because of national conflicts when I was only 2,5 years old. I visited it at the age of 5 and then at the age of 13. Of course I want to visit it again one time. Practicaly all my relatives live there - in Bishkek and Tokmok
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Oh, I chose wrong language to mark this post.=/

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