PRECIOUS MEMORIES Precious Memories

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Last week,_I visited one of my friends.__When I came to her house,_it is my frist time saw her face.__It sounds like a inconceivable thing.__Nine beautiful ladies appeared in front of the door.__Even I have some confused.__I did not know which girl is my classmate.__Because of my friend come from Saudi Arabia.__All of day I just can see her deeply eyes.__She has nine sisters.__How big of family, in China my family just has one child,_it is me,_we cannot have more than one children.__So sometimes I fell alone.__That night her family very enthusiasm,_they asked me how about China and foreign people ow to think of Moslem.__Actually I do not familiar with any religious belief.__Everyone has their choice,_we should respect them,in my opinion just that.__In our talking,_I have some interesting flavor,_for example,_Saudi coffee and some desserts by her mother. I am foud of different culture so much.__And then she teaches me how to cook Dates,_a kind of Moslem sweet.__Frist thing,_heat butter until it liquefies.__Second,_put in black wheat flour and mix it with Dates.__Final,_put in yoghourt.__So extraordinary for me.It is a awesome day.

Yesterday I went to local night market with my friend.__It is a Malay market.__I bought every foods that I never saw and tasted.__I had found Longan's brother,_it named is Longkong,_a anther kind of fruit.__It is as same as Longan but stronger than Longan.__When you take off its clothes,_it similar to Mangosteen.__My friend said she want share taste sense with her boyfriend.__She thought her has some homesick.__Maybe just missed her boyfriend.


In China,_if a girl do not get married until twenty five years old,_it is called 3S Lady. It is means "Single,_Seventies,_Stuck".__So my mother wants me go back to China and get married with a boy,_when I finished my master.__But I think human's life is very short.__However,_world is limitless.__I feel penned by my life as a housewife.__I need search of different country and culture.__So I will go to other places.__Perhaps,_I will change my idea to get married,_when I twenty five years old.__No man knows what will happen tomorrow.

Yesterday Last night, I went to a local night-market with my friend.  It is was a Malay market.  I bought every all kinds of foods that I never saw and or tasted.  I had found Longan's brother,it named is a relative of longan fruit called Longkong [other English names are langsat or langzone],a anther kind of fruit.It is as same as Longan but stronger than Longan which has a stronger flavour.  When you peel off its skin take off its clothes[haha, 脫衣!] ,it very similar to mangosteen.  My friend said that she wanted share taste it sense with her boyfriend. She thought her has some [不明這两句, 我是猜猜] I suspect that she is either homesick.Maybe just missed or just to reminisce the times she ate the fruit with her boyfriend.


In China, if an unmarried girl of  do not get married until twenty five years old,it is called known as "3S Lady", It is means - "Single, Seventies and Stuck". So My mother wants me go back to China and get married with a boy, [當然是个男孩! 這样寫法是說明你是个同性戀 :) ] when I finished my Master's.  But I think believe [不要媽媽婆婆, 猶豫不缺] that a human's life is very short.  However, and the world is limitless. I feel penned caged [not wrong, just my preference] my life as a housewife. [Good for you!  能獨立是最重要. 要依靠丈夫不是件好事! 人心会变. 有才学是你的保險!] I need search of different country and culture want to discover the world and its wonders.So I will go to other places.Perhaps, I will change my idea to get married when I find my true love.  ,when I twenty five years old.No man knows what will happen tomorrow.Whether I become a "3S" or not, no one knows but in the meantime, I am going to enjoy myself the world has to offer. [作篇結論太弱]

Good piece of rambling thoughts.  Thanks for sharing.

PRECIOUS MEMORIES Precious Memories

Last week, I visited one of my friends.  When I entered into came  to her house, it is was my frist time saw to see her entire face! Sounds incredible? Well, you see, in school, her face veiled heavily.  Yes, she is a Saudi Arabian.   It sounds like a inconceivable thing.There were nine beautiful ladies appeared in the front of the inner court door.  Even I have some was confused because I did not know which girl one is my classmate.  Because of my friend come from Saudi Arabia .All of day Most of the time, I just can see could only peer into her deeply eyes.  Wow, she has nine eight sisters!__How What a big of family!__In China, my family just has one I am the only child.  it is me,we This because of China's one child policy.  cannot have more than one children.So Sometimes I fell feel so alone.  That night, her family was very enthusiastic and enthusiasm,they asked me how much about China and foreign people how we to think of them and their Moslem culture.  Actually I do am not familiar with any religious belief.  Everyone has is entitled to their choice.  We should just respect their beliefs if they do not impinge on mine. [This is very important!] them,in my opinion just that.  In During our chats/conversations talking, I discovered have some interesting wonderful taste such as flavors,for example, Saudi coffee and some desserts made by her mother. I am fond of like different cultures so very much.And Then she [who is "she"? Her mother or your classmate?] teaches taught me how to cook dates, as a kind of Moslem dessert sweet. Firist thing,heat the butter until it melts liquefies.Second,put in Then add black wheat flour and mix it with the dates.  Finally,put add in the yoghourt.  So simple and yet extraordinary for me.  It is was an awesome day.