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A thought from me 看着幽深的夜色,长我站在那里,想知道,担心,怀疑,做着梦没有凡人都不敢梦想之前。

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A thought from me

看着幽深的夜色,长我站在那里,想知道,担心,怀疑,做着梦没有凡人都不敢梦想之前。

 

Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before.

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A thought from me

看着幽深的夜色,长我站在那里,想知道,担心,怀疑,做着梦没有凡人都不敢梦想之前。
 
我直接把改过的写在下面了:
看着幽深的夜,我常现在那里,想知道,担心,怀疑,做着凡人以前不敢做的梦
 
不知道你是不是这个意思,下次请把英语附加上,别人才能充分理解你想说什么,有利于给你改作文

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I'm kinda jealous of you, once u write something in Chinese, thousands of Chinese waiting here to correct ur sentences.
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Alas~
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我凝望着幽深的夜色,漫长地留住了脚步。我思索着,彷徨着,疑惑着,憧憬着凡人以往不敢奢望的梦想。 Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before.

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