My Son

Today,_my mother took my son to visit me  [很多外國人不知大陸環境. 忍別離家在他鄉求生] my home.__I've have/had not seen him for several days.__I'm very miss him much and also  ,also miss my parents!__My son is very a lovely child [太自讚是不好的.我這種寫是法是謙虛些.在英文文化中可以接受.].__All those who saw him commented that people[不能用這字. 意思是說連鬼怪也這样稱讚!] know my son said he would will [這裡定要用將來詞] be handsome when he grew grows [不能用過去的詞句因為這样說法是他已經長大了或者不在人!] up!

My Son

Today, my mother brought my son to my home. I've not seen him for several days. I miss him very much, I also miss my parents! My son is very lovely. Everyone who  knows my son says he will be handsome when he grows up!

We would normally just say "brought him home," as long as she is bringing him to his home. The contraction "I'm" always means "I am." I + am = I'm. You could also say I'm missing him very much.

my son

Today,my mother took my son to my home.I've not seen him for several days.I missed him very much, I also missed my parents!My son is very lovely.All people know my son said he would be handsome when he grew up!