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Sunflower memories I Once upon a time there were a little and fragile sunflower seed who was falling over a chrysanthemum-gerberas field, the fresh air of the morning was playing with her and made her follow unexpected patterns, the sun showed its first light rays over her face so softly that it looked like if it were cherish her brotherly, her eyes, her big, black and bright eyes opened for the first time to the world. She was just an ordinary sunflower seed, which means she had a shape outlined a thin shell and a enjoyable smell. The little seed didn't know that the destiny would test her and make her have some difficult times, which would make her feel pain but that in the end it would help her to discover its own nature to do what any other sunflower would do, to follow the sun and share her halo to bring happiness and illuminate the live of others....

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Sunflower Memories - I

 

Once upon a time there were was a little small and fragile sunflower seed who which was falling over into a field of a chrysanthemums and gerberas. field, The morning fresh air of the morning was afreshed playing with her and made her leading her to follow go to unexpected paths patterns[don't understand what you are trying to say, so I am guessing]. The sun showed its first light shone its gentle rays over her face so softly gently as if an older brother caring for his younger sister. that it looked like if it were cherish her brotherly, One giant  her eyes, her big, black and bright eyes opened for the first time to the world.

She was just An ordinary sunflower seed she was; which means she had a shape outlined a thin shelled and fragrant a enjoyable smell.

The little seed didn't not know that what the destiny would will test her. and make her have some Will it be difficult? times, which would make Will it give her feel pain? but that in the end it would help Whatever the case maybe, she will have her to discover its her own nature to do what as any other sunflower seed must would do, - to follow the sun and share her halo to in bringing happiness and illuminate the live of to others and to light up their lives...

 

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Sunflower memories I

Once upon a time there was a little and fragile sunflower seed who was falling over a chrysanthemum-gerberas field, the fresh air of the morning was playing with her and made her follow unexpected patterns, the sun showed its first light rays over her face so softly that it looked like as if it were cherishing her brotherly, her eyes, her big, black and bright eyes opened for the first time to the world.

She was just an ordinary sunflower seed, which means she had a shape outlined, a thin shell and an enjoyable smell.

The little seed didn't know that the destiny would test her and make her have some difficult times, which would make her feel pain but that in the end it would help her  discover its own nature, which is to do what any other sunflower would do, to follow the sun and share her halo to bring happiness and illuminate the lives of others....

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