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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello. My name is Jiyun.
I'm studying Art&Design at university, so I like drawing and photography.
Also, I like any kind of music and or movie. My favorite hobbies are to playing soccer , going to the a concerts and watching movies.
I'm an outgoing person so I like to meet new people and talk with them !
I'm studying English to so that I can apply for a student exchange program.
This is my first time trying to find a language partner. but and I'll do my best to help you if you want to study Korean!
thank you!
Notes: Jiyun, you have a good command of English. Your writing style is heavily influenced by the way English is spoken. Written English has more formal rules.
Which English placement test are you considering for your student exchange test ?
TOEFL and IELTS appear to be the main choices. Given that you are Korean, I suspect that you have been more exposed to American English. If you are a reasonably good typist, I suggest going for the TOEFL test as that may be easier for you.
On another note, I recently transited through Incheon on my way to Europe, the airport experience was by far the best of my trip. The music and cultural exhibits were unique. Korea obviously has an air pollution problem blowing in from the West though as the skies were grey.
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello. My name is Jiyun.
I'm studying Art & Design at a university, so I like drawing and photography.
Also, I like any kind of music and movies. My favorite hobby is to play soccer and go to the concerts and watching movies.
I'm an outgoing person so I like to meet new people and talk with them!
I'm studying English to apply to the student exchange program.
This is my first time to find looking for a language partner. But I'll do my best to help you if you want to study Korean!
Thank you!
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello. My name is Jiyun.
I'm studying Art & Design at university. So, I like drawing and photography.
Also, I like any kind of music and movies. My favorite hobbies are playing soccer, and going to the concert and watching movies.
I'm outgoing person so I would like to meet new people and talk with them.
I'm studying English to apply for student exchange program.
This is my first time to find a language partner. but I'll do my best to help you if you want to study Korean!
Thank you!
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