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Three Kingdoms: Goguryeo, Baekje, and Silla Although new researches are published for details of Old Joseon, generally it is knowned as Old Joseon was ruined by Han Dynasty in BC 108. After then, many tribal nations turned up, there were Booyeo, Okjeo, Dongye, Mahan, Jinhan, Byunhan, and so on. Jumong was a man who were grown in Booyeo. So Seono was a wife of Jumong. They founded Goguryeo in BC 37, and Jumong became the first King, Dongmyeong. So Seono was not the first wife of Jumong, and she couldn't get the appropriate position. She went down to south land with her two sons, Biryu and Onjo, and founded new country, Baekje in BC 18. And Silla was founded by other person, Hyukguse, in southern east, BC 57. Many countries, including Gaya which was united tribal county in AD 42, were absorbed to Goguryeo, Baekje, and Silla. And it became the period of three Kingdoms.

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Sanghee, this is beautiful. I did the second correction, mine is simpler than Jeff's and more i n line with how we native speakers actually talk. Jeff's correction is excellent if you need to learn Academic English for going to college and such like. Academic English is very different from conversational English. So definitely use both corrections, just know one is more academic and the other is more how you would talk between friends.
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Three Kingdoms: Goguryeo, Baekje, and Silla

Although new researches are published for details of Old Joseon, generally it is known that Old Joseon was ruined by the Han Dynasty in BC 108.
After that, many tribal nations turned up: there were Booyeo, Okjeo, Dongye, Mahan, Jinhan, Byunhan, and so on.
Jumong was a man who grew up in Booyeo. So Seono was a wife of Jumong.
They founded Goguryeo in BC 37, and Jumong became the first King, Dongmyeong.
So Seono was not the first wife of Jumong, and she couldn't get the appropriate position.
She went down to the southern lands with her two sons, Biryu and Onjo, and founded a new country, Baekje, in BC 18.
And Silla was founded by another person, Hyukguse, in the southeast, in BC 57.
Many countries, including Gaya which was a united tribal county in AD 42, were absorbed to Goguryeo, Baekje, and Silla.
And so came the period of three Kingdoms.

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The Three Kingdoms: Goguryeo, Baekje, and Silla

 

Although new researches are published for details of Old Joseon are published, generally it is knowned as Old Joseon generally accepted that the kingdom was ruined by the Han Dynasty in BC 108 BC. After then, Many tribal nations turned up, there were came into being: Booyeo, Okjeo, Dongye, Mahan, Jinhan, Byunhan, and so on.
Jumong was a man who were grown grew up in Booyeo. and with his wife, So Seono, was a wife of Jumong. they founded/established the kingdom of Goguryeo in BC 37 BC .  , and Jumong became the first and became King Dongmyeong.


So Seono was not the first not being the principal wife of Jumong, and she couldn't get the appropriate position cannot attain her position as the Queen. So she went down to south land with her two sons, Biryu and Onjo, and founded a new country, Baekje, in BC 18 BC.

And Silla was founded by other person, Hyukguse, in the southern east, BC in 57 BC.
Many countries, including Gaya which was united tribal county were absorbed in AD 42 AD, were absorbed to by Goguryeo, Baekje, and Silla.

And it became the This period of is known as the "Three Kingdoms" in Korean History. [or you can say the "Korean Three Kingdoms" to differentiate the same term applied to the period in Chinese History due to the book, "Romance of the Three Kingdoms" which is more familiar in the West]

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