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Celebration of Navratei Festival. Navrati a Hindu Festival. It started in the month of Ashwin (A Hindi Calender ). Navratri means, Nav (Nine) + ratri (Night), a celebration and worship of Mother Durga for Nine days and nights. In that days sculptor make Statue of Mother Durga according to rules and regulation. At the seventh day, It is completed with full of traditional weapons. This festival brings prosperity, happiness, Loyality and goodness among people. I celebrated in special way. I did fast in Navratri. During fast, I ate fruits only at one time. Some people did not eat anything. I am not strong as enough for such type of fast. At night, I had been attended Garba Dance for nine days. I saw vividness in garba such as full of lights, a decorated Pandal (I don't know English word of pandal) and many beautiful girls in Traditional dresses. I did dance with some girls. On the Ninth day, I completed my fast in evening. After I went to saw statues of Mother Durga. In Statue, I had seen creativity of sculptor. It was really awesome to saw such a good creativity. I had decided meet to statue maker. However, I didn't find him. At the last night of Garba, I enjoyed much and did so many fun with friends. One thing I got from the fast. It was a good health. I surmount from stomach problem. I lost my weight and free from overeating habit. Really, I felt that Everybody should do one day fast in a week without any reason. It will solve your most of the health issue.

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Celebration of the  Navratei Festival.

Navrati is a Hindu Festival. It startes in the month of Ashwin (the Hindi Calender ). Navratri contains, Nav (Nine) + ratri (Night), a celebration and worship of Mother Durga for Nine days and nights. on that days a sculptor makes the Statue of Mother Durga according to rules and regulation. on the seventh day, It is completed with full of traditional weapons. This festival brings prosperity, happiness, Loyality and goodness among people.

I celebrated it in a special way. I fasted during Navratri. During fasting, I only ate fruits only at one time . Some people did not eat anything. I am not strong as enough for such this type of fasting. all  nights, I had been attended Garba Dance for nine days. I saw vividness in garba such as full of lights, a decorated Pandal (I don't know English word of pandal) and many beautiful girls in Traditional dresses. I did dance with some girls.
On the Ninth day, I completed my fast in the evening. After I went to saw statues of Mother Durga. In the Statue, I had seen saw creativity of sculptor. It was really awesome to see such a good creativity. I had decided to meet to the statue maker. However, but I didn't find him. in the last night of Garba, I enjoyed alot and I had so many alot of fun with friends.

One thing that I benefited from the fast. It ,was a the good health. I surmounted from my stomach problem. I lost my weight and freed from my overeating habit.

 I think Everybody should do one day fast once a week without any reasons. It will solve your most of the health issues.

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On the ninth day, I completed my fast in evening. After which I went to saw see the statues of Mother Durga. In Statue, I had seen can see the creativity of its sculptor. It was really awesome to saw see such talents displayed so vividly a good creativity. I had decided to meet the sculptor but to statue maker. However, I didn't could not find him. At On the last night of Garba, I enjoyed much and did so many had much fun with friends.

One thing I got benefited from the fast. It was is a dose of a good health. I surmount from My stomach problem was gone, . I lost my weight and freed from my habit of overeating habit.

ReallyIn all sincerity, I felt feel that everybody should do one day fast a day in a week without any reason. It will solves your most of the many health issues.

 

Good advice.

 

1.  This is an example how you would  tell you readers terms that have no equivalent meaning in English. 

Durga Puja pandal at College Square, Kolkata

 

A pandal is fabricated structure, either temporary or permanent, in a religious ceremonies including weddings. It is derived from (Tamil: பந்தல்) (pandhal).

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pandal

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Celebration of the Navratei Festival.

 

Navrati a Hindu Festival. It startsed in the month of Ashwin (A Hindi Calender). Navratri means, is nav (nine) + ratri (night), a celebration and worship of Mother Durga for nine days and nights. In that days During the festival, sculptors would make a statue of Mother Durga according to rules and regulation. On at the seventh day, when it is completed with full of her traditional weapon attributes. This It is believed that the festival will brings prosperity, happiness, loyality and goodness among to the people and loyality among them.

I celebrated the festival in a special way. I did fast in during Navratri. During fast, I ate by eating only fruits only at one time. Some people did do not eat anything at all. I am not strong as enough for such type this sort of fasting. At In the night, I had been attended the Garba Dance for nine days. I saw the vivacity of its  dancing lights, the highly vividness in  garba such as full of lights, a decorated Pandal 1 (I don't know English word of pandal) and many beautiful girls in traditional dresses. I did dance with some girls.

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