My room.^_^
I have a very small room, but I have a big bed, 2*1.8,sheets are very beautiful!
Sheets are very beautiful! Is comfortable to sleep on, no matter how well you sleep, you won't have to worry about falling.
I love the aroma lamps, can be in in the evening lamp put some oil and dried flowers.Looks very dream,oil is the fragrance of violets,it will let you have a good sleep.
But this can only upload a picture, you can't see my lamp./(ㄒoㄒ)/~~
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My room.^_^
I have a very small room, but I have a big bed, 2*1.8,sheets are very beautiful!
My sheets are very beautiful! It Is comfortable to sleep on, no matter how well you sleep, you won't have to worry about falling.
I love the aroma lamps, can be in in the evening lamp put some oil and dried flowers During the evening, I can put oil and dried flowers into the lamp .Looks very dream ((I'm not sure what you are trying to say here, this may work better? "It looks like a dream,the oil is thea fragrance of violets,it will let you have a good sleep.
((I can show you this beauty through a picture, but )) this can only upload a picture, you can't see my lamp./(ㄒoㄒ)/~~
For your age, your English is 不錯！
Some sentences, like: "no matter how well you sleep, you won't have to worry about falling." sound like a fluent English person.
很好。加油！
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That is a very nice essay Sylvia.
Your bedding is dreamy and the evening scents you use must be very pleasant.
I thought it funny when you wrote that the bed was large so that you would not fall out of it! Ha ha. Your use of descriptive language is very good.
Your efforts at practicing English are having a good effect. ---Warm Regards, Bruce
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My room.^_^
I have a very small room, but I have a big bed, 2*1.8,sheets are very beautiful!
The sheets are very beautiful! It Is comfortable to sleep on, no matter how well you sleep, you won't have to worry about falling.
I love the aroma lamps, can be in in the evening lamp put some oil and dried flowers in the evening you can put in some oil and dried flowers..Looks very dream-like, the oil is the fragrance of violets,it will let you have a good sleep.
But this can only upload a picture, you can't see my lamp./(ㄒoㄒ)/~~ But I can only upload a picture, you can't see my lamp
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